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Starving

When laughter leaves, the kindness that remains is incidental to civility, the bland politeness, the ability to feign that graciousness is what sustains when underneath, the captive anger reigns and finding life in possibility increases hope's invisibility as once-firm knowledge of will's freedom wanes. When years have passed in blind submission's care, can passion reignite when backs unbend and legs, long crumpled, learn at last to dance? No fortitude (however sure) can bear the pain of ancient wounds none cared to mend that could be healed by but one loving glance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/8/2011 12:30:00 PM
I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today Tracy. I hope to be back soon to read them again. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2008 4:19:00 PM
when backs unbend...ancient wounds...one loving glance...awesome, girl! I mean, the writing is awesome, but the subject - tres sad. I actually tried my first regular sonnet a week or 2 ago...love sonnets! Love Kristin
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