Starship Shimmering

Sit softly, soulfully, beside me on this striped swing .

     Smelling my summer scented hair.

     Speak, you, sweet sonnets of Shakespeare.

     Set our souls, starship shimmering!"

          

                    6/30/2021
                       9:35am.
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Eagle Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 5:38 AM
This is very sweet and ponente. Well done.
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Hello again. It's nice when a p reads more than one of another's work! You make me happy! Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:59 AM
You gave us a very tranquil scene Pangie, those summer days where you are totally relaxed, yes, you feel your soul Soar. You've mastered the acrostic form. Tom
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Tom! I have sooo many of those moments! LOL
Cunningham Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Lol why did i say acrostic, senior moment.
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Tom,,a reminder, This is alliteration, I am good at acrostics as well. But cannot hold a candle to to your poetic expertise.you hold and a wonderfully humane arritude! Add humility,too, Pangie. Xx Hugs, Pangie xx
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Sweeping shades of succulent and seasoned soup my savvy and scholarly friend! Yes, this one shines in a savory soup. Splashed with seeds of salty sauce and some serious Shakspearian salutes... A fav... God bless
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Ahh, I see you gave me seconds of that savory and sensational stamp of approval. Such sends sweet sounding salutary sassy-ness to this old poet's starved and sensitive ears. God bless...
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Holy Smokes! What an allerative comment, Just beautiful. Your command of English is truly outstanding! A fav! I curtsy! )); To God be the glory,. Panagiota xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Splendid! (especailly 'sweet sonnets of Shakespear)
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Greetings, Michelle! Appreciate seeing you today, agree in the lune you liked, Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Hellopanagiota, Lovely.Hugs xx
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 9:27 PM
Are you there? Seems like you are not. That's Ok. Just hope you are fine. Friday 9:30 pm PST. Unusual you missed my POTD today, PR Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Hellopanagiota, you are welcome. Hugs xx
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Darlene, many thanks Hugs, Pangie xxoo
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