Stars Tempt Our Senses


It was time to visit the stars
To embrace them with my senses
Though the price was astronomic
I saved up for the expenses

Most think stars are unreachable
Due to the heat that they emit
But perhaps they’re very cautious
Just like a candle barely lit

To my delight way out in space
I manned microphones to listen
And those astral bodies obliged
With unheard of stellar hissin’

Yet as I approached a star’s sphere
After flying the cosmic trades
The brightness was so intense, that
I had to double up my shades

And I can describe what I saw:
Just imagine a sunrise view
As seen, not through a broad window
But rather in the room with you

So no doubt that shine would lead one
To coming to the conclusion
That stars are inhospitable
But my suit was safe for fusion

I attempted smelling their scent
But was honestly not impressed
As the smell was like burnt popcorn
Which is an odor I detest

I couldn’t say that star was burnt
For that flawed logic is misplaced
Yet that stench made me hesitate
To give a roasted star a taste

Sure it twinkles in the dark sky
Like a sugary cosmic treat
But just like mentioning candy
It would probably wreck my teeth

Lastly, touching a star is like
A swimming pool in the hot sun
With those spots of warmer water
Times a million degrees, plus one

Visiting the cosmos was worth 
Having stars arouse my senses
Yet it isn’t for everyone
And comes with some consequences

But don’t you take my word for it
When you are traveling in space
Since stars are an acquired love
To be approached at your own pace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/12/2024 6:58:00 AM
This is fantasy at its best. I enjoyed my trip to the stars. I'm smiling.
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:16:00 AM
A fave, David! So glad I checked this one out! You’ve touched the stars with your senses. They are out of reach but you’ve managed to draw them close!
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David Fisher
Date: 1/26/2024 4:15:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Kim. The real stars are worth our efforts.
Date: 1/23/2024 9:01:00 PM
A FAV for my list, David. Masterpiece comes to mind. Should be a POTD IMHO. I loved the journey you take the reader on, and you'd make a good tour guide to the galaxies. Thanks for giving us some good info on the experience, my friend. Enjoyable poetry. Bill
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David Fisher
Date: 1/26/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Bill for your kind words and support. I guess words can take us anywhere.
Date: 1/23/2024 8:34:00 PM
Hey, you want to be a tour guide for Elon Musk's 'Circle of Stars Space Tour.' Sounds like you got the credentials, David. ~ Jeff B. Zos
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David Fisher
Date: 1/26/2024 4:18:00 PM
I shall Musk if I must. Thanks again.
Date: 1/22/2024 5:55:00 PM
A great but crazy poem. It's definitely an attractive option for the svi-fi crowd. It's a charming, poetic distraction.
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