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stars of clarity

what is clear when the fog clears, the fog that makes you tipsy, the dizzy feeling of falling… there are stars of the past, the fallen angels - we don’t call them angels. no longer the cherubs. stars of clarity - amazing. ebon sky fills the mind. wisdom of the ages, I find. those sparkling creations - clarifying, cleansing diamonds glitch. the ring, no longer petrified, but razzle dazzling. of what I speak of: the time you held my hand and we tarried under the tent of darkness and light, targeted our future - it was the brightest white. a bazillion stars filled the horizon aliens landed… I imagined. stars of clarity outreach - they preach a sermon. it is deep.

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Date: 12/5/2023 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Stars of Clarity" is a beautiful write. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2023 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 12/4/2023 2:38:00 PM
This was a lovely poem.. congratulations on your placement
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, my wonderful friend!
Date: 12/4/2023 3:02:00 AM
This is so deep and so beautiful, flow of your imagery and depth of what you’ve expressed here is beyond stunning. I love how descriptive it is and the ending especially stood out for me as well as “ there are stars of the past the fallen angels - we don’t call them angels.” Deep! “ the time you held my hand and we tarried-under the tent of darkness and light” creative! Loved reading this. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ink Empress!
Date: 11/28/2023 7:53:00 AM
Yes, PREACH... God bless you always, love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 11:39:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/24/2023 6:44:00 PM
WOW! This is beautiful, so enchanting.... powerful, all of it. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thank you kindly! <3
Date: 11/22/2023 10:08:00 AM
What a very beautifully worthy contender for the contest, Kim! Dazzling and ethereal. My very best wishes, good poetry friend. ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs
Date: 11/22/2023 6:28:00 AM
Lovely, romantic verse! "those sparkling creations - clarifying, cleansing diamonds glitch." Superb poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2023 9:34:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Joe!
Date: 11/21/2023 2:55:00 PM
Intriguing perspective, Kim. I enjoy your entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! I want to congratulate you for having three of your poems published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology! YEAH !!! Have a Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2023 9:35:00 AM
Thank you on all accounts! Happy Thanksgiving! <3
Date: 11/21/2023 1:16:00 PM
A lovely poem for the contest.. you expressed it so well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2023 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet silent friend! <3

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