Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

 

Stars come in many forms.... as bright as their shine so are the other stars we have in our lives... :) In my life, I came to know lots of stars  some twinkle so bright that they light my life all through out, some they twinkle but then they did burst and I found them twinkling no more... 

Last November 07, 2015, first in so many years waiting finally our family is graced a little star.. And I truly pray that someday I will have also two stars... :)! I love my sister's little star..

I want to put into writing as much as possible the stars that I somehow seen in my life in this poem. 

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Sponsor Kelly Deschler

Contest Name Twinkle Twinkle Little Star 

Placed 5th...

 

O.E. Guillermo

2:12 pm, April 24, 2014

Stars Light, They Shine Bright

Glowing gems that dress the night,
I yearn to know your brightness art
blinking quick, blinking slow
my running thoughts you make them go...

From arid desert to distant worlds,
stars white shimmer a wordless speech:
their wink--a gift of hope to travelers
who dare tread the darkest steep.

In my arms, I have one little star
so mild, so child, my antidote to fear
twinkle in her eyes, my happiest tear
years ebb my star bloom to a big star

I clap loud for my star scintillates from afar
Amidst terrors strike, she, standing still
her Venus light shining in the flight of years.
She soft-hearted despite some limiting steel

My star swim, swim to life's stream
'til pass a tide, she found her hearts' star
One day he said: "she is his dearest"
so eighth of February, they breath their vows

Soon, after a year, my before little star
now cradles her own baby star.
Her eyes so deep, her grin so sweet,
our little star add a touch of treats.

Twinkle, twinkle little stars-- 
gleam silver above the skies
let your light boogie near or far
on each fair fields that before us lie.

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Poet Destroyer A December 22, 2015 at 3:59 PM olive, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA

Robert Lindley December 22, 2015 at 10:50 AM A magically delicious delight to read my friend. Congrats on your win!!!

Michael Tor December 22, 2015 at 7:17 AM Love this Olive. Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 1:35 AM Lovely write n win Dear Olive.. big congrats!

Skat A December 21, 2015 at 11:49 PM olive, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos June 4, 2015 at 10:37 AM Hi Olive, love this beautiful twinkling piece -that magnificently glitters! Your niece is such a beautiful baby! Congratulations on an awesome win! Warmest regards. Pandita Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 8:16 AM Its ok Pandita.. =) Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2015 at 8:21 AM Oh, oh - forgive me - handsome little nephew:-) May he be always blessed!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2015 at 1:36 AM weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... =') nephew Pandita.. :D! thanks much!

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 8:09 PM Hi Olive, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 7:22 AM Thanks much Lollie Linda =)

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:45 PM Olive, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE

Kelly Deschler May 9, 2015 at 2:14 PM I enjoyed this beautiful, expressive write. Very nicely penned, Olive! Congrats on a win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 7:23 AM Thank you Kelly.. =)

Gary Bateman May 5, 2015 at 11:43 AM Hello Olive, This one is very well-penned and articulated!! Bravo!! This poem is a wonderful recognition of your sister's Little Star. Quite Perfect. A "7" + FAV from me!! Best Wishes, Gary Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2015 at 8:37 AM thanks so much Gary adding this to your faves is a wow.. :)!

James Fraser April 29, 2015 at 1:23 PM Love this Olive, love it to bitz. Especially 'so eighth of February, they breath their vows' xx to my favs little one, tight warm hugs//James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 2:55 PM :) thank you James....still remember huh....yes tight warm hugs~olive eloisa xxx

Ravi Sathasivam April 29, 2015 at 2:07 AM Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 2:46 PM thank you Ravi... :) GBU

Milton Robertson April 28, 2015 at 7:57 PM Really a lovely poem Olive. God Is Truly Good. The Little Star is a True God has Blessing From Above. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 5:34 AM thank you so much Milton.. :)!!!

Carolyn Devonshire April 27, 2015 at 12:46 PM Dear Olive, a beautiful love story. Romance makes for some of the finest poetry and I really enjoyed this one. My favorite line was ,"Stars white shimmer a wordless speech." You brought life to the heavens! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 6:23 PM thanks much Carolyn... :)!!! God bless you always.. :)!~olive eloisa

Sharlotte Newan April 27, 2015 at 11:19 AM I like your take too. I only know one style of writing my poetry. So it great to read how graceful your writing it. I love it! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 6:22 PM I was same before but as I jump from rope to ropes here I found that there are some of which I challenge myself to try.. :)!thank you!olive eloisa

Jan Allison April 27, 2015 at 7:50 AM A sparkling write Olive - beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 6:21 PM thank you Jan.. :)! hugs back!xxx

Nandita Das April 27, 2015 at 5:59 AM You unveil such beauty with this write. Beautiful. #7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 6:15 PM thanks much Nandita..:)! GBU

Constance La France April 27, 2015 at 3:56 AM Olive, beautiful and charming twinkle poem, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my limerick poem Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 10:41 AM thank you so nuch for visiting mine as well.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2015 at 2:00 AM - I love it, I give it a 7, I "fav" this really beautiful poem, dear Olive !!! - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 27, 2015 at 8:03 PM Thank you Anne Lise my... :)! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee making this as your fave wow!!! Have a wonderful week too! ~olive eloisa :)!