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Stars come in many forms.... as bright as their shine so are the other stars we have in our lives... :) In my life, I came to know lots of stars some twinkle so bright that they light my life all through out, some they twinkle but then they did burst and I found them twinkling no more...

Last November 07, 2015, first in so many years waiting finally our family is graced a little star.. And I truly pray that someday I will have also two stars... :)! I love my sister's little star..

I want to put into writing as much as possible the stars that I somehow seen in my life in this poem.

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Sponsor Kelly Deschler

Contest Name Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Placed 5th...

O.E. Guillermo

2:12 pm, April 24, 2014

Glowing gems that dress the night, I yearn to know your brightness art blinking quick, blinking slow my running thoughts you make them go... From arid desert to distant worlds, stars white shimmer a wordless speech: their wink--a gift of hope to travelers who dare tread the darkest steep. In my arms, I have one little star so mild, so child, my antidote to fear twinkle in her eyes, my happiest tear years ebb my star bloom to a big star I clap loud for my star scintillates from afar Amidst terrors strike, she, standing still her Venus light shining in the flight of years. She soft-hearted despite some limiting steel My star swim, swim to life's stream 'til pass a tide, she found her hearts' star One day he said: "she is his dearest" so eighth of February, they breath their vows Soon, after a year, my before little star now cradles her own baby star. Her eyes so deep, her grin so sweet, our little star add a touch of treats. Twinkle, twinkle little stars-- gleam silver above the skies let your light boogie near or far on each fair fields that before us lie.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/22/2015 3:59:00 PM

olive, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/22/2015 10:50:00 AM

A magically delicious delight to read my friend. Congrats on your win!!!

Michael Tor

Date: 12/22/2015 7:17:00 AM

Love this Olive. Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 1:35:00 AM

Lovely write n win Dear Olive.. big congrats!

Skat A

Date: 12/21/2015 11:49:00 PM

olive, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/4/2015 10:37:00 AM

Hi Olive, love this beautiful twinkling piece -that magnificently glitters! Your niece is such a beautiful baby! Congratulations on an awesome win! Warmest regards. Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 8:16:00 AM

Its ok Pandita.. =)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2015 8:21:00 AM

Oh, oh - forgive me - handsome little nephew:-) May he be always blessed!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2015 1:36:00 AM

weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... =') nephew Pandita.. :D! thanks much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 8:09:00 PM

Hi Olive, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 7:22:00 AM

Thanks much Lollie Linda =)

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 6:45:00 PM

Olive, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/9/2015 2:14:00 PM

I enjoyed this beautiful, expressive write. Very nicely penned, Olive! Congrats on a win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Kelly.. =)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/5/2015 11:43:00 AM

Hello Olive, This one is very well-penned and articulated!! Bravo!! This poem is a wonderful recognition of your sister's Little Star. Quite Perfect. A "7" + FAV from me!! Best Wishes, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2015 8:37:00 AM

thanks so much Gary adding this to your faves is a wow.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 4/29/2015 1:23:00 PM

Love this Olive, love it to bitz. Especially 'so eighth of February, they breath their vows' xx to my favs little one, tight warm hugs//James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/29/2015 2:55:00 PM

:) thank you James....still remember huh....yes tight warm hugs~olive eloisa xxx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/29/2015 2:07:00 AM

Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/29/2015 2:46:00 PM

thank you Ravi... :) GBU

Milton Robertson

Date: 4/28/2015 7:57:00 PM

Really a lovely poem Olive. God Is Truly Good. The Little Star is a True God has Blessing From Above.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/29/2015 5:34:00 AM

thank you so much Milton.. :)!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2015 12:46:00 PM

Dear Olive, a beautiful love story. Romance makes for some of the finest poetry and I really enjoyed this one. My favorite line was ,"Stars white shimmer a wordless speech." You brought life to the heavens! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:23:00 PM

thanks much Carolyn... :)!!! God bless you always.. :)!~olive eloisa

Sharlotte Newan

Date: 4/27/2015 11:19:00 AM

I like your take too. I only know one style of writing my poetry. So it great to read how graceful your writing it. I love it!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:22:00 PM

I was same before but as I jump from rope to ropes here I found that there are some of which I challenge myself to try.. :)!thank you!olive eloisa

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2015 7:50:00 AM

A sparkling write Olive - beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:21:00 PM

thank you Jan.. :)! hugs back!xxx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/27/2015 5:59:00 AM

You unveil such beauty with this write. Beautiful. #7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:15:00 PM

thanks much Nandita..:)! GBU

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2015 3:56:00 AM

Olive, beautiful and charming twinkle poem, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my limerick poem

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 10:41:00 AM

thank you so nuch for visiting mine as well.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2015 2:00:00 AM

- I love it, I give it a 7, I "fav" this really beautiful poem, dear Olive !!! - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/27/2015 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise my... :)! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee making this as your fave wow!!! Have a wonderful week too! ~olive eloisa :)!