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Stars in the Haze Inspired by Why Don’t You Stay

Written: November 15, 2024 For Glenn Hughes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori _____________________________ In the quiet of the evening, a whisper echoes through my mind, the old saying wraps around my heart, stubborn, as ivy on a weathered wall. I have been praying, for the girl who stands out as a star, a flicker in the haze of my lonesome nights. I think you have felt the weight, the soft heaviness of sad thoughts, as rain that slowly seeps into the ground. I have been waiting to touch you, With each passing hour a reminder of the warmth that lingers in your smile, a photograph etched into my soul. I remember you, wide-eyed and wild, a spirit that danced with the wind, yet I feel the shadows creeping— the worries that press against your heart. I promise, no rush, no hurried steps down paths unclear, I’m here, as a lighthouse, calling you back to the shore of safety. Stay, won’t you? Just for a moment, hold back the tides, the pull of things unknown and scary. Let’s weave our stories anew, break that gateway to where hope and fear can coexist. Let’s sit under a sky painted with stars, where our words flow as water, each drop a piece of our truths, each pause a chance to breathe. Let’s lay out our tender hearts, like a canvas eager for raw strokes, this is our chance— to build a world where sorrow softens, to craft a love that rises same as dawn. So, baby, don’t slip away, let’s hold tight to this moment, turn the shadows into light, and let’s chase the darkness together. With each heartbeat, I’m calling— won’t you please come back?

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Date: 12/5/2024 11:17:00 PM
How mystical and beautiful are these lines woven in such a catchy manner! I love “ Let’s sit under a sky painted with stars, where our words flow as water, each drop a piece of our truths, ” the subtle use of alliterations and the way youv painted imagery here is magical and truly artistic! Pleasure reading this! Congratulations on your win! And its good to see you back again! Keep sharing your poems!
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Date: 12/5/2024 4:58:00 PM
I always feel the rush to read you dear poet. This is one of a kind blend I enjoy reading. congratulations on your win. Cheers.
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Date: 12/5/2024 6:49:00 AM
Some of the best imagery i have seen is in this poem you’ve created. Great work. Congrats on 3rd place. I hope to see you entering my next contest on Glenn Hughes.
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Date: 11/17/2024 8:09:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Really enjoyed reading is. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/16/2024 8:24:00 AM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing..............
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Date: 11/15/2024 7:29:00 PM
Let’s weave our stories anew, break that gateway to where hope and fear can coexist...the way love moves slowly, surely, with an aim in mind but mindful of heart that needs healing or coaxing. Blessings, Lasaad!
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Date: 11/15/2024 6:43:00 PM
So beautiful....I really like your romance poems...they're more meaningful than most I read.
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Date: 11/15/2024 4:42:00 PM
Dear Lasaad. This is a tale of love, patience in waiting and hoping for that love to return. Reminiscing on the lovely moments shared and wanting to return to those moments and wishing she stay. A loving pursuit of that special one that touched your heart... A wonderful entry for this contest...
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Date: 11/15/2024 11:36:00 AM
Wow, such a nice love poem.
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Date: 11/15/2024 11:34:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, you have "painted" romance in your eloquent words. You write so beautifully of a love that continues despite separation with a desire to talk - to communicate, to repair and renew transcending pain. This is a beautiful, elegant poem expressing your heart's desire. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of renewed joy to you, dear friend!
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Date: 11/15/2024 10:03:00 AM
Hello Sotto my friend.. Your poem beautifully captures the delicate dance between love, vulnerability, and hope. Its evocative imagery and heartfelt tone draw readers into the poems emotional world, offering a touching reminder of the transformative power of connection. It is both an ode to enduring love and a testament to the strength required to bridge emotional distances. Best of luck in the contest..
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