Stars and Those With Stripes

"America First",
is the worst.
Should not thinking of others,
be your thirst?
Those who are selfish,
end up being cursed!
Soon they'll be last,
instead of first.

Who among you,
prefers guns and war?
Do you really have freedom,
shore to shore?
If most have less,
are you happy with more?
Should the privileged few,
be guarding the door?
Protectionism,
rots you to the core.
In the end,
you won't know who it's for?

What does it mean,
to be "Great Again"?
I'll listen to learn,
try your best to explain!
Were there fields of cotton and sugarcane?
Was it back of the bus perfect,
everyone staying in their own lane?
A pain striped passport,
for those on the soul train.
If you know the truth,
please speak it plain.
I want to find great,
I've wracked my brain.
Whose America are you trying to regain?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Babbit Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 10:56 AM
How did I miss this first time around? I watched the news last nite, both Fox and CNN, where is the America we longed for? Well defined write.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Thanks DM. I agree.
Raven Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Hi Richard, this is a thought provoking write. It is well written and too the point. I wont stay on this one wrong because my thoughts go to the idiot and then anger. When does America get back to her greatness? I love the content of your write. It has left me thinking and as i always say, that is not a bad thing. A Fave. Funny, I don't usually read Political Verse. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thought provoking piece which many can relate to and policies he implements impact not just in the US:-( Belated congrats on your POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Ashley Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 7:08 PM
An intriguing, thought provoking and compelling poem Richard. Powerfully expressed my friend. Belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors!
Walsh Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Indeed Rich whose America But the puppet strings of patriotism are long and winding and the source is rarely visible. Nice write...
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Hello Richard ,congratulation on POTD. Hav anice eveningmy frend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:11 AM
I relate to your words on a personal level Richard. A well written poem asking most important questions. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Connie., what a great comment to start my morning.
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Interesting to see if his presidential term last, also if it does, if he can command a second term. Only the Citizens of the USA, can decide. One concern is that now China's Xi Jinping wants a lifelong term, Trump may get ideas..
Duggan Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Oh Richard I couldn't have said it better myself.like leanne there is more I could say but I will keep my opinions to myself, you have really spoken the truth in this remarkable piece of poetry and congrat's on POTD, take care......Vera
Lamoureux Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Don’t hold back on my account. Thanks for your visit Vera.
Manassian Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Speaking the truth is always difficult, Richard, but I'm glad you have done just that here....and so well. I hope that this poem will get people to rethink some of his policies. Sorry I've been away...Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 8:43 AM
I am saddened by all that is transpiring. He rethinks his policies daily hourly and by the second. His is a mind of shifting sand. God help the world.
Teagan Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 12:14 AM
I have a lot I could say about why America isn't "great" but it wouldn't go over well. Congrats on your POTD.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 8:40 AM
I feel that greatness does lay within. I know many amazing people but I fear the ones who have taken control.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:45 AM
A powerful write Richard, really enjoyed. A fave for sure;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Keith.
Williams Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 2:11 AM
A belated congratulations on POTD Richard on this excellent write, have been in Hawaii these last three days and just catching up with PS today....Maria
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Lucky you! I hope you had an amazing time.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Such a majestic and powerful country, I could add more, but I'd be torn to shreds. Yeah, a person racks their brains constantly on the shambles of the 'leading' nation, those it's Heads of Power attempt to lead on it's home soil, as well as on the world stage. Congrats on POTD.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:13 PM
The box here isn't BIG enough...don't get me started. Being torn to shreds doesn't really worry me, I'll wait for the next one. I try to be polite in sophisticated company. I think your Nova Scotia or Canada though, so you're safe....well, maybe.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thanks Leanne, you would not be torn to shreds. I welcome alternate perspectives. In fact I am surprised the other side of the coin has not been expressed.
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD hugs Eve
B. Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD. I am so happy to be Canadian.
Raven Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Hi Richard, a belated congratulations for this poem of the day. The accolade is well deserved. You go from strength to strength in your poetry Richard. This one goes into my faves. Such a powerful and honest write. Your friend always....Mike.
Lee Sr. Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Richard Supreme write, Congrats on your POTD post. This verse is so true, stellar write Thanks for sharing your creativity,,, James
Warrior Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...great write Richard...excellent for POTD...stay in the light...^WW^
Wanter Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations! We'll never be great without respect, and this man is not the one to command it.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:11 AM
True.
One Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Congrats on POTD...
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thanks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Slam! Powerful pen Richard! Perfect selection for POTD, a must read. Congratulations to you and your muse :) xomo!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Thanks Maureen, it was a pleasant surprise.
Talbot Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Richard, A well worthy POTD, congratulations! Mick
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thanks Mick.
Cunningham Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on P.O.T.D. Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Tom.
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:38 AM
returning with congrats Richard on POTD!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Vijay.
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