Stars Above Your Head

Such beauty and precision
Fills every piece of your life
Stars and planets are too imprecise
Maybe you see them as too simple
Or just not pretty enough for you
Only one thing could please you
Make you feel relaxed and at home
Snowflakes of every shape and size
Hanging above your head while you sleep
Giving you the world that you want
The world you need

© Poem – XII/XII/MMXXI

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/13/2021 6:55:00 AM
Perhaps snowflakes are even more precise and detailed than the stars... each one unique. I enjoyed your lines.
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