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Stars

i look across the sky i lean back too look up high then i stop and wonder why how could the stars be so bright when every thing just isnt right they have that one last bit of hope while i hang here from a rope its hard to stay from the past when the thought are just so vast i die a little every day but careful to hide my dismay i was told poetry frees the soul thats what i guess to be my unreactable goal so here i sit and spill my heart thinking twice about every mark scared to just make a smuge scared that i may be juged so i let myself make this post hoping no hate at the most well this is all i have to say i guess ill go my own way untill it call for another day

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Date: 6/8/2011 1:50:00 PM
Expressive and interesting write with nice images, susan
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Susan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:29:00 PM
this kinda reminds me of the types of songs i write... and it puts me in a happy place! ;) thx for writing this cause it's so supercalafragalisticexpealidocious! oh and welcome to poetry soup- im a newbie too!-AddieThornton
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:42:00 PM
Susan i....i absolutly love it it is amazing.....yeah u already know what im gonna say :P cya in school
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