Stars

Like a constellation of shining stars
The two of us from a cluster afar
Destined to meet and cross in life
Girl meets boy becomes his wife




The magic begins with just one kiss
A wonderful touch of heavenly bliss
This special love makes two become one
A beautiful friendship has just begun




We were two shining stars out for the night
When we first met there was explosion of light
Now we’re sharing our dreams together
Blazing through life and all sorts of weather




These beautiful stars have just begun
Their romance shining under the sun
Now they have a house and child
This new little star so tender and mild




© Copyright KC.Leake
28th September 2015
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Fantasy fiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/3/2015 7:35:00 AM
Very pretty and well-written. I love the simplicity I have found in your poems thus far ... complicated feelings and sensations so well broken down for the reader. A joy to read ... CayCay
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thanks agian Caycay, I am glad you are enjoying my poetry and I always take time to read others, because there's lots of beautiful writers all over the world. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/1/2015 2:53:00 PM
Kevin, beautifully penned, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, love dwells...
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/2/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thanks Broken Wings, For the visit and comment. Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/1/2015 8:36:00 AM
Oh, so lovely. A much enjoyed read! Thanks, Kevin.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 12:03:00 PM
Hi Kim, Thanks for the visit and lovely comment, its much appreciated. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/1/2015 2:11:00 AM
Beautiful Kevin, It is amazing how a small baby can bring so much joy in life.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thanks Deborah, Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the read. God Bless Kevin
Date: 9/30/2015 11:46:00 PM
this is a magical read. Kevin, thanks for sharing your passion and pen... LINDA
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Linda, For the read and wonderful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 3:20:00 PM
Very Beautiful Kevin
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/30/2015 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I'm glad you enjoyed this!! Thyanks for the response and kind words God bless Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 3:11:00 PM
So Romantic !
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/30/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thanks Charma, So glad you liked it, thanks for the compliment God Bless Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 9:53:00 AM
lovely.The comparison of stars with two bonded souls and then there little one gave this poem a deep depth that will echo in the minds of readers for a long time. enjoyed it.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/29/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Miraj, That is a fantastic compliment, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! God Bless Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 5:30:00 AM
- So soft and beautiful to read, Kevin - It is beautiful ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/29/2015 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Anne, For the read and lovely comment, it is always appreciated, Glad you liked it!!! God Bless you Kevin
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