Stars

Like a constellation of shining stars The two of us from a cluster afar Destined to meet and cross in life Girl meets boy becomes his wife The magic begins with just one kiss A wonderful touch of heavenly bliss This special love makes two become one A beautiful friendship has just begun We were two shining stars out for the night When we first met there was explosion of light Now we’re sharing our dreams together Blazing through life and all sorts of weather These beautiful stars have just begun Their romance shining under the sun Now they have a house and child This new little star so tender and mild © Copyright KC.Leake 28th September 2015 All Rights Reserved Fantasy fiction

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2015 7:35:00 AM

Very pretty and well-written. I love the simplicity I have found in your poems thus far ... complicated feelings and sensations so well broken down for the reader. A joy to read ... CayCay

Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thanks agian Caycay, I am glad you are enjoying my poetry and I always take time to read others, because there's lots of beautiful writers all over the world. Best Wishes Kevin

Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2015 2:53:00 PM

Kevin, beautifully penned, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, love dwells...

Kevin Leake
Date: 10/2/2015 1:31:00 AM

Thanks Broken Wings, For the visit and comment. Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/1/2015 8:36:00 AM

Oh, so lovely. A much enjoyed read! Thanks, Kevin.

Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 12:03:00 PM

Hi Kim, Thanks for the visit and lovely comment, its much appreciated. Best Wishes Kevin

Deborah Turner

Date: 10/1/2015 2:11:00 AM

Beautiful Kevin, It is amazing how a small baby can bring so much joy in life.

Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 4:10:00 AM

Thanks Deborah, Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the read. God Bless Kevin

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2015 11:46:00 PM

this is a magical read. Kevin, thanks for sharing your passion and pen... LINDA

Kevin Leake
Date: 10/1/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thanks Linda, For the read and wonderful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Tim Smith

Date: 9/29/2015 3:20:00 PM

Very Beautiful Kevin

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/30/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thanks Tim, I'm glad you enjoyed this!! Thyanks for the response and kind words God bless Kevin

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/29/2015 3:11:00 PM

So Romantic !

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/30/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Charma, So glad you liked it, thanks for the compliment God Bless Kevin

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/29/2015 9:53:00 AM

lovely.The comparison of stars with two bonded souls and then there little one gave this poem a deep depth that will echo in the minds of readers for a long time. enjoyed it.

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/29/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Miraj, That is a fantastic compliment, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! God Bless Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2015 5:30:00 AM

- So soft and beautiful to read, Kevin - It is beautiful ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/29/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you Anne, For the read and lovely comment, it is always appreciated, Glad you liked it!!! God Bless you Kevin