Starry Notes

crescent moon refrains
 fade into night's melody,
 lyrics tinged with gold
 twinkle with each starry note,
 a song clings to Luna's glow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chansarkar Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Its beautiful Joseph,congrats!
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Wow such beautiful description. Congrats on your win, Joseph.
Scars Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:08 AM
perfect tanka and sounds lovely out loud...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:32 AM
A 7 for this lovely piece, Joseph. Congrats on your win. Janice
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:27 AM
- A wonderful choice of your own favorite poem to this contest, Joseph - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nau Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 8:53 PM
EXCELLENT! A7
La France Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 10:18 PM
a very nice tanka, I like it
Horsman Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:39 PM
this is amazing Joseph, could fit into a song and sang has the chorus over and over.
May Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thank you Harry
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Your romantic imagery turned this into a lullaby for me Joseph. Just lovely! #7 ; )
May Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Thank you Connie... and thanks for the 7...hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Very pretty one, Joseph.
May Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Thank you Andrea...hugs
Lane Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:02 PM
You've created a celestial symphony. I applaud the orchestra and you, the composer, Joseph.
May Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much for that beautiful comment Lin..that symphony had long been composed, I was just an observer...hugs
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