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Starry Notes

crescent moon refrains fade into night's melody, lyrics tinged with gold twinkle with each starry note, a song clings to Luna's glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/15/2016 9:44:00 AM
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Its beautiful Joseph,congrats!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/14/2016 10:12:00 AM
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Wow such beautiful description. Congrats on your win, Joseph.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/14/2016 10:08:00 AM
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perfect tanka and sounds lovely out loud...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/14/2016 9:32:00 AM
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A 7 for this lovely piece, Joseph. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2016 8:27:00 AM
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- A wonderful choice of your own favorite poem to this contest, Joseph - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 5/14/2016 8:53:00 PM
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EXCELLENT! A7
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Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2016 10:18:00 PM
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a very nice tanka, I like it
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Harry Horsman
Date: 5/10/2016 3:39:00 PM
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this is amazing Joseph, could fit into a song and sang has the chorus over and over.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/10/2016 8:16:00 PM
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Thank you Harry
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2016 10:45:00 PM
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Your romantic imagery turned this into a lullaby for me Joseph. Just lovely! #7 ; )
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Joseph May
Date: 5/10/2016 10:37:00 AM
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Thank you Connie... and thanks for the 7...hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2016 3:34:00 PM
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Very pretty one, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/9/2016 4:26:00 PM
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Thank you Andrea...hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/9/2016 2:02:00 PM
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You've created a celestial symphony. I applaud the orchestra and you, the composer, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/9/2016 4:25:00 PM
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Thank you so much for that beautiful comment Lin..that symphony had long been composed, I was just an observer...hugs

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