Starry-Eyed

Hey, Twinkle Twinkle little star
Why are you the way you are?
Teasing and taunting from afar
While I walk barefoot without a car.

I am alone and the night is dark
I sleep on a cold bench in a park,
When hungry I eat tree's bark
And envy the free roaming lark.

Wet in the rains, hot under the sun
Getting my bearings I am on the run,
Up above the sky you get all the fun
You're looked up to - Me, they shun.

But it's OK, I am just the earth's scum,
Up above the world you beat your drum,
You sparkle and make things hum
While here below I hurt but keep mum!


"Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest by Kelly Deschler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/9/2015 8:09:00 PM
Hi Abdul,, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:45:00 PM
Abdul, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/9/2015 2:18:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative take on the contest theme. Nicely written and rhymed, Abdul. Congrats on a win!
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:03:00 PM
Abdul, you have created a poem deep with emotion, well done rhyme poem, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, why god
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Date: 4/25/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thanks lot. You write with emotion too - deep and fluid. I like reading your poems.
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