Starman



Within the swirling currents of stars
He materializes, a silhouette against chaos
He is the whisper throughout time of stories untold

Worn out boots pound the cracked pavement
The echoes of centuries ripple beneath him
He carries a heavy urgency within his heart
He carries the truth, secrets, and all the lies

In the alleyways where shadows conspire in silence
Sleepy eyes wide awake in the rising dawn
Boisterous laughter falters, the world stills
That moment suspended, all breaths held in

This traveling Starman opens his mouth to speak
Pausing showing his sad eyes meeting doubt
"Time is such a fragile entity" he states
"Yet it bends for those who dare listen"

He is the only sound heard, the voice of time
He outlines all that has led up to now
For his people, because to them he is a God
And The Savior is here to warn the tides

"Protect what you love and abandon frivolous material"
"Keep thy community strong and your house stronger"
"Do not worship false idols, do not give into temptation"
"And tempted you will be, The Whispering Storm is near"

Subtle gasps quickly hush as everyone huddles closer
Everyone's heart beats faster than time itself
"What lies in the Whispers of Winds is the truth"
"The truth spun drastically for one to believe"

And the legends tell once you believe there is no alternative
Your Soul becomes part of this ever-growing storm
And it becomes evil...It becomes the death...
As all you love will get swallowed with who believes

He ends with starlit tear drops falling from his eyes
For he has seen the power of the storm, he almost believed
He almost gave into temptation if it weren't for those he loved
So he protected them in the end, love prevailed his time

He turns and slowly glides past the masses of His people
Questions being thrown from every direction go unanswered
Because the only answers have to come within ones self
And those answers carry the weight of this world

Into the folds of existence upon untraveled paths
He fades...Fades away to another time, another place
Leaving only the echo of his words within their hearts
Leaving to where he knows he can never return

Because he already knows the outcome... 


Written for poetry contest "Starman" on 11/18/2024
Hosted by: Tom Woody           Form: Dramatic Verse


            PLACED 5TH PLACE IN CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/22/2024 8:02:00 PM
Like Tom, I too wish I had written this. This is so grand and majestic especially how you have introduced the Star man at the opening of the poem with the echoes of centuries rippling behind him and he carrying a heavy urgency within his heart. He has such power that when he speaks, all other sounds are stifled. The way he fades at the end into another place and time as an echo is so much in keeping with a celestial figure and adds to the mystic effect of the poem. Congratulations dear Brian on your win.
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/23/2024 1:21:00 AM
Wow thank you so much you just made me smile so wide I am happy that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you again I appreciate you
Date: 11/22/2024 9:27:00 AM
Gosh Brian, wish I had written this. So awesome. Congrats on your placement
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/22/2024 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Tom I am glad you enjoyed it and that I placed so well it's tough competition out there!! It just makes it worth it when you hear that someone out there enjoys it, till next time
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