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Starman

one sugar in his tea just like me shoes double knotted but he did like to look at the stars, for fleeting moments he was out there and in that stare stars knew him he didn't say where he was from but if I had to guess I'd say The Pleaides

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Date: 12/5/2023 3:30:00 PM
awesome, Clive. So creative and I was impressed with the last line...how poetically clever that was...have to fave this one, Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/5/2023 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Sara, glad you liked it
Date: 12/5/2023 10:33:00 AM
"There's a Starman waiting in the sky..." My first reaction to this coolish scifi scribble
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/5/2023 11:23:00 AM
Ha, it was in my mind when I scribbled this, thanks Tom

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