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Starman

one sugar in his tea
just like me
shoes double knotted

but he did like 
to look at the stars, 
for fleeting moments
he was out there
and in that stare 
stars knew him

he didn't say
where he was from
but if I had to guess
I'd say The Pleaides

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Date: 12/5/2023 10:33:00 AM
"There's a Starman waiting in the sky..." My first reaction to this coolish scifi scribble
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/5/2023 11:23:00 AM
Ha, it was in my mind when I scribbled this, thanks Tom

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