Starlit Sheets Senryu

Silky, sapphire sheets Sensuous skins, ah, so sweet Summer’s starlight speaks Rhymed Senryu 8/25/2021 1

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/26/2021 3:10:00 AM

You create a very sensual image in a few words. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2021 10:02:00 PM

Thanks Tom! I live writing these, Danke for commenting, Hugs, Pangie

John Lawless

Date: 8/25/2021 4:45:00 PM

A lovely bit of sensual poetic metaphor to make the eyes blink a bit faster. Nicely done Pangie.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/25/2021 5:12:00 PM

Greets! John. A great poem, far etter than mine, is EE Cummings, really sensuous poem is.. " I like my body, when it is with your body..." That is the title! Smoking, plus. Glad to note dudes comment on this... I see it is too lusty for a woman to comment to? Wow! Shades of Catholic elementary school..))) Sex was a sin? I didn't even write about sex per se in this one. I just thought of beauty...gee.... You can tell, I am a free thinker....thanks! Multo Appreciando! Hugs.. Pangie

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/25/2021 3:47:00 PM

Very nice, Pangie; though using familiar imagery, you make it all fresh and new...sign of a uniquely original poetess. Great read!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/25/2021 4:31:00 PM

Prince de Mino...it takes a man to comment, ))) Thanks for expressing your appreciation))( Hugs to your Ila. I feel like part of your family. So does my cat...Irene sends you her meows! Panagiota,