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Starless Night

i walk alone the echo of footsteps tapping back to the beat of rain as it falls pooled with my tears no stars to catch my wishes this darkened night just flashes of light beyond the hills that tremble with the roar of thunder i stop at garden's edge a lavender rose beneath the bramble struggles, petals closed it hangs in the bleakness as alone as i no stars to wish upon i walk, rose in hand through the darkness alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/3/2019 8:06:00 PM
The imagery -- starless night, footsteps echoing, flashes of light, lavender rose petals struggling -- combine so powerfully to render the aloneness resonant, echoing down soulless corridors of despair. So masterfully penned, Sandra! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a sweet comment my friend, i always have been able to use nature to convey my moods... :) hugs
Date: 10/3/2019 9:19:00 AM
Melancholy served just right, you are an incredible writer, taking a simple thing like the rain, and translating it into feelings, you have a gift!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 9:59:00 AM
What a wonderful compliment and comment John, thank you so much, it made me smile on this gloomy, rainy day :) hugs
Date: 10/3/2019 7:42:00 AM
Starless and alone--not a friendly night for sure..so well depicted, Sandy!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay...rainy nights, rainy days, always bring some gloom... hugs :)
Date: 10/3/2019 7:34:00 AM
Your words could like up even the darkest night. Though somber, they glow beautifully upon the page illuminating the hearts of your readers. This was gorgeous my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend...just a rainy evening to end the day... the sound of the rain on the roof inspired my muse :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 10:17:00 PM
So beautiful and sad, too... emotive write. I love it. God bless you friend
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina, God Bless... :)
Date: 10/2/2019 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Lovely imagery.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 9:54:00 PM
...a fav...<3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:59:00 AM
thank you so much my friend :) hugs

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