Starless Night

i walk alone
the echo of footsteps
tapping back
to the beat of rain
as it falls pooled
with my tears

no stars 
to catch my wishes
this darkened night
just flashes of light
beyond the hills
that tremble
with the roar
of thunder

i stop
at garden's edge
a lavender rose
beneath the bramble
struggles, petals closed
it hangs in the bleakness
as alone as i

no stars to wish upon
i walk, rose in hand
through the darkness
alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/3/2019 8:06:00 PM
The imagery -- starless night, footsteps echoing, flashes of light, lavender rose petals struggling -- combine so powerfully to render the aloneness resonant, echoing down soulless corridors of despair. So masterfully penned, Sandra! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a sweet comment my friend, i always have been able to use nature to convey my moods... :) hugs
Date: 10/3/2019 9:19:00 AM
Melancholy served just right, you are an incredible writer, taking a simple thing like the rain, and translating it into feelings, you have a gift!
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Date: 10/3/2019 9:59:00 AM
What a wonderful compliment and comment John, thank you so much, it made me smile on this gloomy, rainy day :) hugs
Date: 10/3/2019 7:42:00 AM
Starless and alone--not a friendly night for sure..so well depicted, Sandy!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay...rainy nights, rainy days, always bring some gloom... hugs :)
Date: 10/3/2019 7:34:00 AM
Your words could like up even the darkest night. Though somber, they glow beautifully upon the page illuminating the hearts of your readers. This was gorgeous my friend.
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Date: 10/3/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend...just a rainy evening to end the day... the sound of the rain on the roof inspired my muse :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 10:17:00 PM
So beautiful and sad, too... emotive write. I love it. God bless you friend
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Date: 10/3/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina, God Bless... :)
Date: 10/2/2019 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Lovely imagery.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 9:54:00 PM
...a fav...<3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 8:59:00 AM
thank you so much my friend :) hugs
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