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Staring Off Into Space

Out of his mind lost all control Whither his soul Mad as can be completely insane Whereto his brain Garbled speech making no sense Illogic dispensed Here he comes now staring off into space Kindly greet him with grace… He’s a card-carrying member of our crazy rat race

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/18/2022 6:25:00 PM

Interesting and witty

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:07:00 PM

Thanks for the great feedback, Karen. Take good care, Gershon

Bill Baker

Date: 6/17/2022 4:27:00 PM

Interesting flow Gershon. I liked it. Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:07:00 PM

Thanks for letting me know, Bill. Happy Father's Day to you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/17/2022 3:37:00 PM

My cousin had an epiphany after having a brain tumor. She was glad to step out of the rat race and to serve mankind instead.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:06:00 PM

Your sister's brain tumor saved her life, I'd say! Here's to service! :) gw

Terry Flood

Date: 6/17/2022 3:22:00 PM

Garrrhhh…. Rats, rats, rats… I’ve got four super genius rats nicking by bird seed all day long. I’ve got six… yes that’s like all the fingers on one hand and both of your thumbs… SIX traps out and they just run around them. So when I’m staring into space… I’m scheming rat Armageddon. Like the write, Gershon, even if it has given me a nervous tick…

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:06:00 PM

Six traps. Hmm. Remember: 'Rats' backward spells 'Star.' Whatever that proves... lol.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/17/2022 2:10:00 PM

Love this clever piece Gershon...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:04:00 PM

Hey, thank you so much, Michael. Appreciate all of your support! :) Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 6/17/2022 12:46:00 PM

the trouble is Gershon, the rats are winning......

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2022 8:02:00 PM

Just remember, John, that 'rats' backward spells 'star!' ~ Twinkle, Twinkle