Staring At Ashes

The morning I woke in your arms, I asked you 
to close the curtains round the bed of our bliss - 
and you did.
The next day I tore off the covers
trying to give you your comeuppance
to push past perceived reluctance
what a petulant, brash, fussy fit.
Now shivering and stripped and cold,
I wonder will we ever nestle again 
under the blanket of love,
like that Sunday of old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Good write Sasha, sounds like we both like Sunday's ... luv Michael
Mehta Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:43 PM
I enjoyed poem
A   Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Nicely expressing the deepness of your want..p.d.
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