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Staring At Ashes

The morning I woke in your arms, I asked you to close the curtains round the bed of our bliss - and you did. The next day I tore off the covers trying to give you your comeuppance to push past perceived reluctance what a petulant, brash, fussy fit. Now shivering and stripped and cold, I wonder will we ever nestle again under the blanket of love, like that Sunday of old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 5:12:00 AM
Good write Sasha, sounds like we both like Sunday's ... luv Michael
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:43:00 PM
I enjoyed poem
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:03:00 PM
Nicely expressing the deepness of your want..p.d.
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