Staring

At dinner, I stopped and stared at you.
The way an ant stares at a blade of grass 
Or a heathen at a temple
And the way a child lays on a carpet in front of cartoons on tv
Staring 
Or how the moon needs the earth but can only stare. 

The waiter kept walking away
Like a bee above a blooming array
And how a meadow looks at snow
Wondering when 
The river will fill it again
And make it green
Like your eyes
Staring at my blue. 

Our eyes are soldiers in a field of grass
Bending each blade with our walk
Staring like the face of a rock
Below a mountaintop. 

Like a branch and its peach
Our love seems out of reach.

I wish you’d cry your green into my blue
That’s how much I’m staring at you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:34 PM
A fine, fine poem on the power of love and how it energizes the essence of one's being. The eyes have it! I especially enjoyed the extended comparison of a human stare to that of an ant transfixed by a blade of grass. Best wishes. Brian
Etheridge Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 11:23 PM
Brian Thank you. That was my favorite part too! Probably too many analogies.
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