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Staring

At dinner, I stopped and stared at you. The way an ant stares at a blade of grass Or a heathen at a temple And the way a child lays on a carpet in front of cartoons on tv Staring Or how the moon needs the earth but can only stare. The waiter kept walking away Like a bee above a blooming array And how a meadow looks at snow Wondering when The river will fill it again And make it green Like your eyes Staring at my blue. Our eyes are soldiers in a field of grass Bending each blade with our walk Staring like the face of a rock Below a mountaintop. Like a branch and its peach Our love seems out of reach. I wish you’d cry your green into my blue That’s how much I’m staring at you.

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Date: 5/22/2023 7:34:00 PM
A fine, fine poem on the power of love and how it energizes the essence of one's being. The eyes have it! I especially enjoyed the extended comparison of a human stare to that of an ant transfixed by a blade of grass. Best wishes. Brian
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Lee Etheridge
Date: 7/18/2023 11:23:00 PM
Brian Thank you. That was my favorite part too! Probably too many analogies.

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