White Wolf Poet Monorhyme

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Stargazing:

A poem I'll write about the delight,

Of the magic light that comes out at night,

Colourful and white and all of them bright,

A heavenly sight all bunched up so tight,

I hope that you might join in on my flight,

The chances are slight that you'll join my plight.

(Ten syllables per line)

For Rhymers Delight contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton.


26~April~2017

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Sandra Haight May 2, 2017 at 9:05 AM Back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest, White Wolf! Sandra White Wolf May 2, 2017 at 5:25 PM Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

John Hamilton April 30, 2017 at 6:56 PM Hey Rick thanks for your entry, nice rhymes, congrats on a fine placement! White Wolf April 30, 2017 at 7:51 PM Thanks a bunch, John /|\

Alexis Y. April 30, 2017 at 5:01 PM Hi Rick, Congratulations on your winning write :-) Alexis White Wolf April 30, 2017 at 5:05 PM Thank you very much, Alexis /|\

Darren White April 27, 2017 at 9:24 AM I'll join, Darren White, for your nightly ride :) Good luck in the contest my friend. White Wolf April 27, 2017 at 5:30 PM In the heavens, we shall travel, all the mysteries they will unravel! /|\

Sandra Haight April 26, 2017 at 7:47 PM Great imagery in your stargazing poem with the use of your fine monorhymes and metered flow, White Wolf. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 10:34 PM Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

John Herlihy April 26, 2017 at 9:12 AM I join in gladly with this kind of light. The stars they are a-shining. How I love to write about them. John White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 5:17 PM Thanks for your visit and comment today, John /|\

Chris Green April 26, 2017 at 8:27 AM Wasn't there a contest by the same name? :) Really nice Rick, smooth flow and descriptive phrasing brings a shimmering light to your poem. White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 5:15 PM Yes, I did this for the contest! Thanks for your visit today, Chris /|\

Elizabeth Kinch April 26, 2017 at 2:47 AM Love this. Another form I have yet to attempt. This flows so easily a 7 from me. White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 2:51 AM Thanks, Elizabeth! You simply must have a crack at it! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis April 26, 2017 at 2:34 AM Magical my friend WW. The chances to join your plight proved to be more than slight! Haha! A 7+ White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 2:37 AM Haha, Lovely comment, Demetrios! Always a delight to see you on this site /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2017 at 2:29 AM - It's a beautiful sight ... and exciting - Great written, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 2:35 AM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise /|\

Supraja Kannan April 26, 2017 at 1:13 AM Beautiful monorhyme... Loved each and every line... Great magical write... A big 7... White Wolf April 26, 2017 at 1:53 AM Yeah, I'm not over the moon with this one, but thanks, Supraja /|\