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A poem I'll write about the delight, Of the magic light that comes out at night, Colourful and white and all of them bright, A heavenly sight all bunched up so tight, I hope that you might join in on my flight, The chances are slight that you'll join my plight. (Ten syllables per line) For Rhymers Delight contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton. 26~April~2017

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/2/2017 9:05:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest, White Wolf! Sandra

White Wolf
Date: 5/2/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

John Hamilton

Date: 4/30/2017 6:56:00 PM

Hey Rick thanks for your entry, nice rhymes, congrats on a fine placement!

White Wolf
Date: 4/30/2017 7:51:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, John /|\

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2017 5:01:00 PM

Hi Rick, Congratulations on your winning write :-) Alexis

White Wolf
Date: 4/30/2017 5:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis /|\

Darren White

Date: 4/27/2017 9:24:00 AM

I'll join, Darren White, for your nightly ride :) Good luck in the contest my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 4/27/2017 5:30:00 PM

In the heavens, we shall travel, all the mysteries they will unravel! /|\

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/26/2017 7:47:00 PM

Great imagery in your stargazing poem with the use of your fine monorhymes and metered flow, White Wolf. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 10:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra /|\

John Herlihy

Date: 4/26/2017 9:12:00 AM

I join in gladly with this kind of light. The stars they are a-shining. How I love to write about them. John

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment today, John /|\

Chris Green

Date: 4/26/2017 8:27:00 AM

Wasn't there a contest by the same name? :) Really nice Rick, smooth flow and descriptive phrasing brings a shimmering light to your poem.

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 5:15:00 PM

Yes, I did this for the contest! Thanks for your visit today, Chris /|\

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/26/2017 2:47:00 AM

Love this. Another form I have yet to attempt. This flows so easily a 7 from me.

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 2:51:00 AM

Thanks, Elizabeth! You simply must have a crack at it! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/26/2017 2:34:00 AM

Magical my friend WW. The chances to join your plight proved to be more than slight! Haha! A 7+

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 2:37:00 AM

Haha, Lovely comment, Demetrios! Always a delight to see you on this site /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2017 2:29:00 AM

- It's a beautiful sight ... and exciting - Great written, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 2:35:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise /|\

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/26/2017 1:13:00 AM

Beautiful monorhyme... Loved each and every line... Great magical write... A big 7...

White Wolf
Date: 4/26/2017 1:53:00 AM

Yeah, I'm not over the moon with this one, but thanks, Supraja /|\