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Stardust Sprinkling Down

all my beloved glance from stars above like candles that twinkle in the night sky and in my dappled dreams they see me weeping so, they sprinkle twinkling magical STARDUST~ silently from ethereal clusters and I gather each enchanted piece within my h e a r t _ ___________________________ June 14, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/stardust sprinkling down Copyright Protected, ID 06-1260-398-14 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, STARDUST sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 06/2020 First Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 1096 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/26/2022 First Place

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 5:16:00 AM

" they see me weeping" - Wow! Such a direct impact. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2022 12:21:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 1:55:00 AM

Poignant and heartfelt Constance. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/20/2020 7:25:00 AM

Your last line is perfect. Congrats Dear One!

V. Deepa

Date: 6/20/2020 7:19:00 AM

Wow.. this piece is very touching. Congratulations on your top win mam:-) keep writing. Best wishes for all your poems too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/20/2020 6:21:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/20/2020 6:20:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.

James Inman

Date: 6/19/2020 11:21:00 PM

Really beautiful Constance.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2020 9:50:00 PM

I am so pleased to see this in First Place Constance. Congratulations! xxoo

John Hamilton

Date: 6/19/2020 9:28:00 PM

Just beautiful Constance congrats on your top win!

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2020 8:51:00 PM

Beautiful yet sad, Congrats on your top win Dear Heart..

John Watt

Date: 6/19/2020 4:31:00 PM

Constance, so magical and reassuring to know that though we have said goodbye to loved ones we are not ever alone. Blessings, my friend and congrats on your #1 placement ~ John

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/18/2020 4:57:00 PM

Both beautiful and lovely Guardian Angels See weeping and sprinkle stardust MAGIC

Constance La France
Date: 6/18/2020 6:23:00 PM

Christopher, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment _Constance

Rashi Soni

Date: 6/16/2020 2:22:00 AM

Simply divine. I have no words to describe this piece. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi

Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 1:22:00 PM

Rashi, I will take divine, that's a wonderful word, thanks so much for visiting and commenting, appreciate _Constance

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/15/2020 10:19:00 PM

A touching write, Constance...very beautiful! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 1:23:00 PM

Rhonda, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2020 11:48:00 PM

Stardust twinkles in this lovely poem Constance. I hope this does well in the contest. Beautiful! xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM

Connie, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the beautiful, I hope Nette likes it too _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2020 9:35:00 PM

Delicate and pretty. A fine tribute to the cosmos.

Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM

Caren, thanks for the compliment and visit _Constance