Stardust Sprinkling Down

all my beloved glance from    stars   above
            like candles that   twinkle   in the night sky
        and in my  dappled  dreams they see me  weeping
     so, they   sprinkle   twinkling  magical  STARDUST~
              silently from    ethereal    clusters 
           and I gather each   enchanted piece   within my  h e a r t _ 



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June 14, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/stardust sprinkling down
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1260-398-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, STARDUST
sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 06/2020

First Place

Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 1096
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/26/2022

First Place
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Date: 3/27/2022 5:16:00 AM
" they see me weeping" - Wow! Such a direct impact. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2022 12:21:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 6/22/2020 1:55:00 AM
Poignant and heartfelt Constance. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:25:00 AM
Your last line is perfect. Congrats Dear One!
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:19:00 AM
Wow.. this piece is very touching. Congratulations on your top win mam:-) keep writing. Best wishes for all your poems too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/20/2020 6:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.
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Date: 6/20/2020 6:20:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.
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Date: 6/19/2020 11:21:00 PM
Really beautiful Constance.
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:50:00 PM
I am so pleased to see this in First Place Constance. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:28:00 PM
Just beautiful Constance congrats on your top win!
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Date: 6/19/2020 8:51:00 PM
Beautiful yet sad, Congrats on your top win Dear Heart..
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Date: 6/19/2020 4:31:00 PM
Constance, so magical and reassuring to know that though we have said goodbye to loved ones we are not ever alone. Blessings, my friend and congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
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Date: 6/18/2020 4:57:00 PM
Both beautiful and lovely Guardian Angels See weeping and sprinkle stardust MAGIC
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Date: 6/18/2020 6:23:00 PM
Christopher, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment _Constance
Date: 6/16/2020 2:22:00 AM
Simply divine. I have no words to describe this piece. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:22:00 PM
Rashi, I will take divine, that's a wonderful word, thanks so much for visiting and commenting, appreciate _Constance
Date: 6/15/2020 10:19:00 PM
A touching write, Constance...very beautiful! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:23:00 PM
Rhonda, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 6/14/2020 11:48:00 PM
Stardust twinkles in this lovely poem Constance. I hope this does well in the contest. Beautiful! xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the beautiful, I hope Nette likes it too _Constance
Date: 6/14/2020 9:35:00 PM
Delicate and pretty. A fine tribute to the cosmos.
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM
Caren, thanks for the compliment and visit _Constance
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