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Stardust Sprinkling Down

all my beloved glance from    stars   above
            like candles that   twinkle   in the night sky
        and in my  dappled  dreams they see me  weeping
     so, they   sprinkle   twinkling  magical  STARDUST~
              silently from    ethereal    clusters 
           and I gather each   enchanted piece   within my  h e a r t _ 



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June 14, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/stardust sprinkling down
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1260-398-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, STARDUST
sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 06/2020

First Place

Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 1096
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/26/2022

First Place

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Christuraj Alex Date: 3/27/2022 5:16:00 AM " they see me weeping" - Wow! Such a direct impact. Beautiful. Congratulations! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/27/2022 12:21:00 PM Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/22/2020 1:55:00 AM Poignant and heartfelt Constance. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/20/2020 7:25:00 AM Your last line is perfect. Congrats Dear One! Login to Reply

V. Deepa Date: 6/20/2020 7:19:00 AM Wow.. this piece is very touching. Congratulations on your top win mam:-) keep writing. Best wishes for all your poems too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-) Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 6/20/2020 6:21:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 6/20/2020 6:20:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 6/19/2020 11:21:00 PM Really beautiful Constance. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/19/2020 9:50:00 PM I am so pleased to see this in First Place Constance. Congratulations! xxoo Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 6/19/2020 9:28:00 PM Just beautiful Constance congrats on your top win! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/19/2020 8:51:00 PM Beautiful yet sad, Congrats on your top win Dear Heart.. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 6/19/2020 4:31:00 PM Constance, so magical and reassuring to know that though we have said goodbye to loved ones we are not ever alone. Blessings, my friend and congrats on your #1 placement ~ John Login to Reply

Christopher Flaherty Date: 6/18/2020 4:57:00 PM Both beautiful and lovely Guardian Angels See weeping and sprinkle stardust MAGIC Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/18/2020 6:23:00 PM Christopher, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment _Constance

Rashi Soni Date: 6/16/2020 2:22:00 AM Simply divine. I have no words to describe this piece. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/17/2020 1:22:00 PM Rashi, I will take divine, that's a wonderful word, thanks so much for visiting and commenting, appreciate _Constance

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/15/2020 10:19:00 PM A touching write, Constance...very beautiful! Blessings, Rhonda xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/17/2020 1:23:00 PM Rhonda, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/14/2020 11:48:00 PM Stardust twinkles in this lovely poem Constance. I hope this does well in the contest. Beautiful! xxoo Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM Connie, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the beautiful, I hope Nette likes it too _Constance

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/14/2020 9:35:00 PM Delicate and pretty. A fine tribute to the cosmos. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/17/2020 1:24:00 PM Caren, thanks for the compliment and visit _Constance