Stardust Sprinkling Down

all my beloved glance from    stars   above
            like candles that   twinkle   in the night sky
        and in my  dappled  dreams they see me  weeping
     so, they   sprinkle   twinkling  magical  STARDUST~
              silently from    ethereal    clusters 
           and I gather each   enchanted piece   within my  h e a r t _ 



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June 14, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/stardust sprinkling down
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1260-398-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, STARDUST
sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 06/2020

First Place

Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 1096
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/26/2022

First Place
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Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:16 AM
" they see me weeping" - Wow! Such a direct impact. Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 12:21 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:55 AM
Poignant and heartfelt Constance. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love
Mcgee Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Your last line is perfect. Congrats Dear One!
Deepa Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 7:19 AM
Wow.. this piece is very touching. Congratulations on your top win mam:-) keep writing. Best wishes for all your poems too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
Agustin Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.
Agustin Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this celestially beauteous muse. God bless you.
Inman Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Really beautiful Constance.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:50 PM
I am so pleased to see this in First Place Constance. Congratulations! xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Just beautiful Constance congrats on your top win!
May Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:51 PM
Beautiful yet sad, Congrats on your top win Dear Heart..
Watt Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Constance, so magical and reassuring to know that though we have said goodbye to loved ones we are not ever alone. Blessings, my friend and congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
Flaherty Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Both beautiful and lovely Guardian Angels See weeping and sprinkle stardust MAGIC
La France Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Christopher, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment _Constance
Soni Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:22 AM
Simply divine. I have no words to describe this piece. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi
La France Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Rashi, I will take divine, that's a wonderful word, thanks so much for visiting and commenting, appreciate _Constance
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:19 PM
A touching write, Constance...very beautiful! Blessings, Rhonda xx
La France Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Rhonda, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Stardust twinkles in this lovely poem Constance. I hope this does well in the contest. Beautiful! xxoo
La France Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the beautiful, I hope Nette likes it too _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Delicate and pretty. A fine tribute to the cosmos.
La France Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Caren, thanks for the compliment and visit _Constance
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