Stardust Sprinkles


Stardust sprinkles twinkle on top of creamy crinkled cake ~ heavenly!! 


15th April 2023


For JCB Brul's "Stardust" contest
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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:07 PM
loving this foodie one again. BIG congrats
Volumes Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Stardust sprinkles on a cake, how delightful, it must be for someone very special. A wonderful take on the theme Jo, unique, thoughtful and so beautifull. Congratulations on your win.
Poet Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. A pretty write. Sounds like dessert is at your house. Hahaha!!! Have a great/blessed weekend.............
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:54 AM
And, yummy Jo! What a delightful take on the contest theme - sweet stardust sprinkled on desert!!! Love the alliteration. Adds so much like stardust sprinkles on your cake! Blessings!
Gasun Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your shining win and this beautiful and sweet monoku my dear poet friend Joanna. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs..
Y. Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Hi Jo, This is a yummy one-liner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
Ayantika Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:59 AM
A poem as lovely as its subject! Congratulations Jo:)
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:47 AM
- Congratulations on your sparkling win, Jo :) - hugs
George Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations Joanna on your sweet take on the subject and your creditable win.
George Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 9:51 PM
Beautiful and yummy ! Definitely it tastes delicious.... !
Edmonds  Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 2:21 AM
So it does, a lovely sparkly Monoku Joanne… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Cute!
Baker Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 3:53 PM
An enticing Monoku. Sounds like a special experience. Well written, Joanna. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Yummy . Love this one
Fowler Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Here you with the food again - LOL. :)
Sands Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Great one! Yum :)
Turner Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 5:35 AM
I prefer orange, please, extra speinkles:) This one is delicious, Joanna. Good luck!
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 1:47 AM
- Yummy ... creamy crinkled cake, Jo - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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