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Stardust Sprinkles

Stardust sprinkles twinkle on top of creamy crinkled cake ~ heavenly!! 15th April 2023 For JCB Brul's "Stardust" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:07:00 PM

loving this foodie one again. BIG congrats

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/29/2023 7:16:00 PM

Stardust sprinkles on a cake, how delightful, it must be for someone very special. A wonderful take on the theme Jo, unique, thoughtful and so beautifull. Congratulations on your win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2023 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write. Sounds like dessert is at your house. Hahaha!!! Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2023 9:54:00 AM

And, yummy Jo! What a delightful take on the contest theme - sweet stardust sprinkled on desert!!! Love the alliteration. Adds so much like stardust sprinkles on your cake! Blessings!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/29/2023 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your shining win and this beautiful and sweet monoku my dear poet friend Joanna. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs..

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 6:02:00 AM

Hi Jo, This is a yummy one-liner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day;-) Alexis

Akanksha Ayantika

Date: 4/29/2023 2:59:00 AM

A poem as lovely as its subject! Congratulations Jo:)