Stardust Serenade

As silence speaks; night spreads its cloak deep blue. Moon blooms as it caresses the face of sea, and radiant stars dance with my thoughts of you. It’s as if eternity shines down on me. Are the stars the eyes of angels silver-white, which like sequins sparkle all around on a canvas breathed on by God each night? Across the sky serenity streams down. I think the angels read my thoughts and sigh as I dream of you and your sweet kiss. Sprinkles are falling from each angel eye. Are they brightly blinking now from my bliss? Stardust is falling from heaven above. It must be the gift of the angels’ love.
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Reese Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 12:41 PM
You are very talented I wish you wrote more of your poems in the complex styles The ones like this that you do are quite beautiful
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Be assured. I have hundreds like this. You only have to click on the list of my best poems or click on types. Check out my sonnets, pantoums, terzanelles, etc. Thanks for the compliment
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I looked at this contest a couple of times, but I was never inspired to write anything. You've done a really nice one. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 1:01 PM
Thanks, Sara
Dronsfield Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 12:37 PM
A wonderful sonnet my friend. Congratulations!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Thanks, Ken
Liguori Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:59 AM
Lovely sonnet. Congrats on third.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Muchas gracias , muchacho.
La France Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:43 AM
Andrea, beautifully written and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Thanks so much, dear
Rolland Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:42 AM
wonderful poem the third stanza is a jewel thanks poet andrea I think the angels read my thoughts and sigh as I dream of you and your sweet kiss.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:42 AM
Wow thanks, yann
Crandall Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:18 PM
That's a sweet serenade!
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Thanks, David
Godwin Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Perfect. That's it, that's everything.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Thanks. I loved that contest
Kerr Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 6:36 AM
Hello Andrea, This sonnet gets full marks from me on every literary criterion. Imagination, originality and flow. Good luck with this, Howard
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:00 AM
Thank you. It was a joy to write
Buhagiar Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 1:33 AM
Wish I had the gift of angels' love. Loved your sonnet. Best for a win.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:01 AM
I wish the same for myself! Angels' love!
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