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Stardust

Starlight, stardust shining brightly

glistening twinkling glittery

setting the dark skies alight

giving a perfect backlight

passionately runs riot 

brimful and without limit

starlight, stardust shining brightly

glistening twinkling glittery


contest: Stardust in an octelle written 07/05/2013 by Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 7/18/2013 10:23:00 PM Shadow, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/19/2013 4:30:00 PM Ty Skat hope all is well? Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/17/2013 1:29:00 PM Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyed reading this one today...Sara Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/19/2013 4:31:00 PM hi Sara ty so nice of you Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/16/2013 4:11:00 AM this has a childlike tone, so innocently done, shadow... congrats on your win inmy contest.. do check my blog!...:) huggs Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/17/2013 12:11:00 PM Hi Nette ty for placing me glad you enjoyed it ty for running contest Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/15/2013 9:18:00 PM I enjoyed your poem, well done! Congratulations. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/17/2013 12:12:00 PM hi Richard nice of you to read appreciated Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/9/2013 2:04:00 PM nice one, sha... reminding you that an octelle is: (8 lines/ syllables:8-8-7-7-7-7-8-8/ rhyme:aa,bb,cc,aa First and last couplets identical)... all the best!..:) huggs Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/10/2013 2:55:00 PM hi Nette ty corrected it I missed the count in the 5th line Shadow x smiles

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/7/2013 7:04:00 AM And you said you had no inspiration.This dosen't sound like that to me.Magnificently penned! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/7/2013 3:13:00 PM it comes and goes lol fickle. Dear friend Ty for your encouragement Love Shadow x smiles

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 7/7/2013 3:45:00 AM This is very magnificent Shadow. You really penned it well. Applause! AO Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/7/2013 3:14:00 PM AO I really appreciate your feedback Ty Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/6/2013 1:09:00 PM thanks, caught this briefly, shadow... :) huggs Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/7/2013 3:15:00 PM hi Nette glad you did Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/5/2013 10:20:00 PM this is very twinkly and pretty, just like stardust! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/7/2013 3:16:00 PM ty Andrea hope you enjoyed your W/E Shadow x smiles

Laura Breidenthal Date: 7/5/2013 3:33:00 AM You sure know how to paint a vivid picture with words. Glorious poem! Always, Laura Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/5/2013 11:56:00 AM hi Laura and ty so much glad you enjoyed Shadow x smiles

Robert Pettit Date: 7/4/2013 9:06:00 PM The late Hoagy Carmichael wrote and recorded an immortal song with the same title. Reading your work reminded me a bit of the lyrics. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/5/2013 11:54:00 AM hi Robert not an artist I am familiar with. I will have to listen to them. I hope the comparison was favourable ty Shadow x smiles