Stardust

herds of folk flocked him worldwide; but stopped abruptly when his star fell

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:19:00 PM

Yes, that sure happens a lot in this world of fleeting fame. Congrats to you, Alexis.

Len Gasun

Date: 4/29/2023 8:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and this lovely monoku my dear poet friend Alexis Y. Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/29/2023 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis on your win! Digging your perspective on stardust, a celebrity no doubt.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2023 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/29/2023 10:03:00 AM

A brilliantly written, riveting poem, Alexis. I'm back with congratulations on your win. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 2:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Alexis :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/25/2023 7:06:00 PM

In fame and popularity people will flock round someone. But in downfall everyone will quit. Most are fair weather friends....! A harsh truth well excemplified, Alexis.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/22/2023 10:03:00 AM

It is sad when our idols become fallen idols, but no one is perfect, proving that even the biggest stars are still human... An interesting write, Alexis, and a unique take on the theme. Very well written! My best wishes for the contest!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/15/2023 4:41:00 PM

Hopefully, there'll be those around him who care for him, rather than his stardom. You always shine in loved ones' eyes. A magnificent monoku, Alexis. Blessings:)