Star Wish

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make a star your wish as gloomy as a spider has faith in future Written: October 16, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 9:25:00 AM

We know not what the future holds for us, but wishing for a star / light, is the starting point of faith, my friend. Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/16/2022 11:02:00 AM

Hello Soto, I always make a wish on a brightest star. Enjoy your day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/16/2022 11:02:00 AM

You display the star as if hanging by a thread in space. Your faith in the future looks gloomy. I believe God holds the future in His hands, having already seen it. I enjoyed your haiku…very well done!