Star Falls

Blinded and scorched at first from the light and the heat
truly now, I can begin to see your face and feel your heart
Bathing in the soft warmth and glow of your beautiful smile
now, I can see the miracle of a star falling, on my lonely world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Manassian Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 1:31 AM
A captivating piece. Lovelly
Brown Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Thanks as always, Eileen. So glad that you liked it
Ebbs Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Aww, this is sweet, thank you for sharing!
Brown Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Ed
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