Star

A tiny light so far away Allows us to get a glimpse of yesterday...Unseen until it's life it lacks, and when the sky is darkest black. sh ine o n

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/23/2025 8:05:00 PM

Very descriptive and creative, Crystol. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2025 4:11:00 PM

Very cleverly done . For the shape contest, right?

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/22/2025 9:42:00 AM

It inspired this but i decided on an older shape poem, kiss, to enter in the contest. Ty! Xo

Valsa George

Date: 2/21/2025 8:08:00 AM

This is so cool and seems effortless, very ingeniously done. I can see your star glimmering on the page exactly like one glistening in the sky. Well done, dear Crystol. All the Best.

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/22/2025 9:45:00 AM

That's very kind of you and I appreciate your attentions! Xo

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/21/2025 7:52:00 AM

Dear Crystol, so delicate yet insightful, a quiet meditation on time and light. I love the design and the way it unfolds feels like a star in of itself, distant, fleeting, but leaving a lasting impression. Beautifully done. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/22/2025 9:44:00 AM

How sweetly said, thank you! Xo