Crystol Woods Poet Shape

Star

                                                 A
                                                tiny
                                             light so
                                           far    away
                              Allows us to get a glimpse
                                  of yesterday...Unseen
                                    until it's life it lacks,
                                  and when    the sky is
                                 darkest                black.
                                  sh                            ine       
                                 o                                   n

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Janice Canerdy February 23, 2025 at 8:05 PM Very descriptive and creative, Crystol. Janice

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2025 at 4:11 PM Very cleverly done . For the shape contest, right? Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:42 AM It inspired this but i decided on an older shape poem, kiss, to enter in the contest. Ty! Xo

Valsa George February 21, 2025 at 8:08 AM This is so cool and seems effortless, very ingeniously done. I can see your star glimmering on the page exactly like one glistening in the sky. Well done, dear Crystol. All the Best. Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:45 AM That's very kind of you and I appreciate your attentions! Xo

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 21, 2025 at 7:52 AM Dear Crystol, so delicate yet insightful, a quiet meditation on time and light. I love the design and the way it unfolds feels like a star in of itself, distant, fleeting, but leaving a lasting impression. Beautifully done. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:44 AM How sweetly said, thank you! Xo

Benjamin Bartley February 20, 2025 at 5:34 PM Wow, the STAR shines on ... very difficult and well done. Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:44 AM Thanks so much! Xo

Paula Goldsmith February 20, 2025 at 12:34 PM I enjoyed reading your creative "Star" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one but your's is better. Have a fun day writing away.................. Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:44 AM Thank you Paula!! Xo

I Am Anaya February 20, 2025 at 11:27 AM Very cool and Sweet! Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:42 AM Tysm! Xo

Kim Rodrigues February 20, 2025 at 10:51 AM Love this, Crystol! Crystol Woods February 22, 2025 at 9:42 AM Ty! Xo