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Stands Still Sentinel

Stands Still Sentinel

              Night may be dark or moon-lit
                  Weather be mild or miserable
               Gentle breeze soothes or storms dance,
                Lone Lighthouse stands still sentinel.

              Sea waves turn terrifying turbulent 
                      Sky is covered with dense dark cloud-veil
              Lightning dazzles,flashes, thunder bolts roar.
                      Fearless Lighthouse stands still sentinel.

               Whirling wind spread dreadful devastating dust
                     Violent vortex threatens ships on sail.
               Vigorous cyclone may thrash any moment
                  Tireless light house stands still sentinel.

              Lighthouse sends intermittent beams alarming vessels.
                    Strong forceful storms chase showers in hail.
                     Topsy-turvy billowy ocean grows outrageous
                      Dauntless Lighthouse stands still sentinel.

        04/10/16

                 Sentinel Quatrain form Poetry contest  Fourth Place

     Sponsor Eve Roper
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A   Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in Eve's contest... Linda
Bhurani Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Congrats.... Excellent description......best wishes
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Great imagery in your words, Anisha. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Dutta Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Thanks Sandra
La France Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Anisha, wonderful poem for the contest, best of luck, 7 ~
Dutta Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Thanks BO
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Nicely done!! Mine is kind of on the same lines as this one too. Good luck i the contest, anisha.
Dutta Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Thanks Andrea
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Anisha, perfect for the contest! good luck :)-luloo
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Laura
Hoffman Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Your poem brings to mind about how our oak trees withstand the storms in our yard but the others topple over! Good description of a light house!:)
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Thanks Cheryl
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