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Standing Watered Ground---Sentinel Contest

Standing Watered Ground
                          Silence Within My Sound  "Sentinel"




        In the midst of oceanic chaos and madness
            The shores cornerstone anchors in pain
                Elemental forces assaulting in frigorific air
                    An amphibious blitzkrieg, a coup de main
 
            Proud, stoic tower of light standing strong 
                Within the core of this cyclonic devastation
                    Whipping winded white water warrior waves
                        Surrounded lone structure of land starvation

                Tidal waves of torment fill watered down walls
                    Gasping for air these breathing blocks may drown
                        Anxious skies await to bleach newly broken blocks
                            However this man made structure stands its ground



                                                         04/06/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/26/2016 1:07:00 AM
I feel a sense of calmness... Brian, a wonderful win... Linda
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/21/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 4/15/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/16/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you BL I appreciate your kind words
Date: 4/14/2016 10:35:00 PM
Congrats on a great win
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph
Date: 4/14/2016 7:41:00 PM
Awesome win, my friend. Congratulations.
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I appreciate your comments my friend
Date: 4/14/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Brian, back to congratulate you on your fine win in the 'sentinel contest'. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 4/7/2016 6:26:00 PM
Very vivid imagery in your words, Brian. The wild waves and stoic sentinel...nicely done. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thank you Sandra I appreciate your input very much

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