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Standing Watered Ground---Sentinel Contest

Standing Watered Ground Silence Within My Sound "Sentinel" In the midst of oceanic chaos and madness The shores cornerstone anchors in pain Elemental forces assaulting in frigorific air An amphibious blitzkrieg, a coup de main Proud, stoic tower of light standing strong Within the core of this cyclonic devastation Whipping winded white water warrior waves Surrounded lone structure of land starvation Tidal waves of torment fill watered down walls Gasping for air these breathing blocks may drown Anxious skies await to bleach newly broken blocks However this man made structure stands its ground 04/06/2016

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Date: 4/26/2016 1:07:00 AM
I feel a sense of calmness... Brian, a wonderful win... Linda
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/21/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 4/15/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/16/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you BL I appreciate your kind words
Date: 4/14/2016 10:35:00 PM
Congrats on a great win
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph
Date: 4/14/2016 7:41:00 PM
Awesome win, my friend. Congratulations.
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I appreciate your comments my friend
Date: 4/14/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Brian, back to congratulate you on your fine win in the 'sentinel contest'. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/15/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 4/7/2016 6:26:00 PM
Very vivid imagery in your words, Brian. The wild waves and stoic sentinel...nicely done. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thank you Sandra I appreciate your input very much

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