Standing Tall and Looking Good

towering soldiers
watch over hidden forest
in dressed camoflage






New Entry For
Raul Moreno's 
Soalance In Nature Contest



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September 5, 2009 at 11:52 PM
Best wishes with this one Katherine.Rgds Brian & thanls for your welcome blog comments today.
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September 5, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Lovely Haiku Katherine>>James
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September 4, 2009 at 11:54 AM
I really like the creative perspective in this poem. The first and last lines work so well together. I think you have a winner. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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September 4, 2009 at 11:13 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Katherine. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Wonderful double meanings! Well done, Katherine!
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September 4, 2009 at 6:20 AM
I love this..nice metaphors..best wishes in the contest.
Guzzi Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 5:38 AM
aye they do look guardian like! Light & Love
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September 4, 2009 at 5:26 AM
Beautiful image, Katherine. I love this haiku. Blessings, Carolyn
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