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Standing Still

It's not a stillness, really, but the noise fading into something else. I am the forgotten beat in the rush, the space between clashing symbols, drowned out but unbroken. They circle around me, a frenzy of flashes, their words sparks, their bodies electric with purpose - all moving, all wanting, but I am the breath between their sighs. I don't belong to their script. No damsels, no dragons, no knights, no flashing lights to guide me home. I'm not waiting for a saviour, not longing for some twisted fantasy, but standing still, watching their world whirl by, wondering why l'm meant to join. It's an alien thing, this rush they call life - loud and hungry, a chorus I never asked for. But here, in my pause, I find something they'll never see: the quiet I refuse to swallow, the stillness that speaks louder than their endless demands. I'm not here to be shaped, not here to follow any painted road, and I have no story to write but the one I make now, with every moment I stay outside their frame, with every breath I take in defiance. Let them chase their lights and fantasies. I'll stand here, a sparkler in the dark, no crown, no tiara, but everything they forgot to name in their relentless spinning.

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Date: 12/9/2024 3:27:00 PM
Frankly, it sounds awfully lonely. Well written Lauren
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Date: 12/8/2024 9:59:00 AM
Your poem powerfully explores the tension between societal pressures and the desire for individuality and self-determination. Through rich imagery and metaphors, it contrasts your inner stillness with the chaotic rush of the world around you. The defiant tone and free verse structure emphasize the rejection of conventional narratives, opting instead to carve out your own path in life.
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Lauren Tilley
Date: 12/11/2024 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for taking the time to write the incredible feedback. I’m so glad you enjoyed it !
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Silent One
Date: 12/8/2024 10:00:00 AM
The poem resonates with those who may feel marginalized or disconnected, offering a message of empowerment in finding strength and meaning through self-awareness and inner peace

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