Caren Krutsinger Poet Blank verse

Standing On Tiny Toes

Standing on tiny toes, faerie-in-training
Floretta reached over the thorns to
Sprinkle her roses with the prettiest
Feelings imaginable.

She gave them glory,
But looked back quickly to see what 
The sun thought.
Glory was actually Sun's.

The sun nodded her "okay".
She could share a bit.
The rose smiled.
Glad to have glory

Along with awe, 
Sensuousness, 
Sexy, and sweet Jesus.
"Wait! Sweet Jesus is mine!" Bumblebee buzzed.

Floretta jumped back. "Sorry," she apologized.
"I got carried away."
Sweet Jesus belongs to everybody,
God told her. Share Him as much as you want....

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Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2019 at 6:56 PM sweet jesus and SWEET poem!!!! Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2019 at 11:28 PM Thank you Andrea. I appreciate it.

Arturo Michael March 7, 2019 at 5:50 PM Wonderful imagination...Almost if not, sounds like you are the faerie...Well done Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2019 at 11:29 PM Thank you Arturo. It has been a trying week;I am trying to uplift everyone including me!

Connie Marcum Wong March 7, 2019 at 5:50 AM We are compelled to write what comes to us. This left a big smile on my face Caren. It was a delight! xxoo Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2019 at 7:05 AM Thank you Connie. I appreciate your stop by. You are always kind to me for sure.

Mahtab Bangalee March 6, 2019 at 11:19 PM beautiful poem- Sweet Jesus belongs to everybody,/God told her. Share Him as much as you want....// Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2019 at 5:29 AM I am rather amazed that this went straight from a fairy poem into a advertisement about Jesus. Ha!