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Standing On Tiny Toes

Standing on tiny toes, faerie-in-training Floretta reached over the thorns to Sprinkle her roses with the prettiest Feelings imaginable. She gave them glory, But looked back quickly to see what The sun thought. Glory was actually Sun's. The sun nodded her "okay". She could share a bit. The rose smiled. Glad to have glory Along with awe, Sensuousness, Sexy, and sweet Jesus. "Wait! Sweet Jesus is mine!" Bumblebee buzzed. Floretta jumped back. "Sorry," she apologized. "I got carried away." Sweet Jesus belongs to everybody, God told her. Share Him as much as you want....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2019 6:56:00 PM

sweet jesus and SWEET poem!!!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2019 11:28:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I appreciate it.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/7/2019 5:50:00 PM

Wonderful imagination...Almost if not, sounds like you are the faerie...Well done

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thank you Arturo. It has been a trying week;I am trying to uplift everyone including me!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/7/2019 5:50:00 AM

We are compelled to write what comes to us. This left a big smile on my face Caren. It was a delight! xxoo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2019 7:05:00 AM

Thank you Connie. I appreciate your stop by. You are always kind to me for sure.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/6/2019 11:19:00 PM

beautiful poem- Sweet Jesus belongs to everybody,/God told her. Share Him as much as you want....//

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2019 5:29:00 AM

I am rather amazed that this went straight from a fairy poem into a advertisement about Jesus. Ha!