Standing On the Line

standing on the line

thoughts turn to death,
crossing over, passing on
what ever term we humans use
to make the inevitable less frightening
 it is the last big event and we avoid the reality.

try and talk about dying with anyone
you are shunned, ignored or worse still
diagnosed as deeply depressed
their eyes roll innocently to your wrists
voice changes to distanced conciliatory tone.

platitudes well rehearsed fumble across
the chilling space in dark profusion
their fingers creep, supposedly unnoticed,
toward the prescription pad
quick, plan your escape silence is golden
scared the stuffing out of the poor beggar

i know i am afraid, mostly of the pain
or stumbling around in a confusion, 
cut off from life,
by the very treatment for pain
there will be loss of self, then, 
a discovery of something so profound,

answers to all of my questions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/17/2017 10:17:00 AM
These words come from your heart, Patricia. So aptly described, the run-in to the end, that "something so profound" that answers all your questions. Sombre thoughts, beautifully stated.
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Peter. I have found in life that no one but no one wants to talk about dying. in any kind and caring way. Oh professionals will try it but that is like chewing on dried out jerky for their client. I am generalizing here. A patient once told me about her experience. She was terminally ill.
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