Standing On Fame's Edge

I stand here in front of a fractured mirror
Tracing veined lines and blemished pores,
That in my  waif-like outline  I dream
About spring’s young complexion…ripe   virginal 
The glint of nubile aura humbling dawn's luster.

Pity this lady; she’ll never understand
How her portraits  are becoming duller now…

The texture of a hollow cheekbone, a saggy neck
Reflects all the vanity disguised as  anguish;
My fear slowly withering  under  piled rouge  
Only to crack along a theatrical stage of old  reruns,
Blurring eye- mascara with heartbreaks  concealed
Against twilight's kept illusions.

Pity this lady, a backstage prop , anonymous
Reliving her glamorous world  lost in time’s curtain call—

Within a verbose oration across a dim  looking-glass,
I stand farther away, paint my famed mouth
And wave at a vacant arena,
Consumed by an explosion of stars pouring on my face.



10/10/2018
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Contest of Craig Cornish: I Stand Here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/21/2018 9:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 10/21/2018 8:54:00 PM
Alas, "all the world is but a stage" and most of us in no hurry to leave its center. Great write Nette
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:16:00 PM
This reminds me of Norma Desmond of Sunset Boulevard fame! Congratulations on your 4th plave win, Nette!
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:00:00 PM
Time has a way of humbling us all. Congrats on your win, Nette. John
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:53:00 PM
Whoa! The ravishes of age so well described. A winner! ~ gw
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Date: 10/10/2018 10:54:00 AM
Lovely write my friend...ready for a win,nette...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:49:00 PM
Dramatic write as expected, Nette:)
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Date: 10/9/2018 8:10:00 PM
Time wears us all down. Fame and love are elusive. Good write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/9/2018 4:49:00 PM
Great write Nette. Time marches on and we get older and sadly lose that sparkle. Tom. Good luck.
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Date: 10/9/2018 4:21:00 PM
"Blurring eye- mascara with heartbreaks concealed..." That alone will fly overt most heads...skilled poetics done with layering. This is that FIRE!!! They should've given you toys, because you're dangerously good with words painting emotion. Hugs with a smile...
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Date: 10/9/2018 2:04:00 PM
- A wonderful description, Nette - Best wishes for winning in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 2:02:00 PM
Reminds of Gloria Swanson as Norma Desmond coming down that staircase in Sunset Boulevard. This was fantastic Nette, such a picture you have created with this one. Once again I am amazed
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Date: 10/9/2018 1:33:00 PM
"vanity disguised as anguish" I think I've commented before, your poetry never ceases to amaze me, nette.
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Date: 10/9/2018 1:13:00 PM
Portrait becoming duller, glamour world lost in time's curtain call..a wave at a vacant arena..these line pretty much say it all..you've captured her persona well, nette. Best for a win.
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