Standing On Fame's Edge

I stand here in front of a fractured mirror
Tracing veined lines and blemished pores,
That in my  waif-like outline  I dream
About spring’s young complexion…ripe   virginal 
The glint of nubile aura humbling dawn's luster.

Pity this lady; she’ll never understand
How her portraits  are becoming duller now…

The texture of a hollow cheekbone, a saggy neck
Reflects all the vanity disguised as  anguish;
My fear slowly withering  under  piled rouge  
Only to crack along a theatrical stage of old  reruns,
Blurring eye- mascara with heartbreaks  concealed
Against twilight's kept illusions.

Pity this lady, a backstage prop , anonymous
Reliving her glamorous world  lost in time’s curtain call—

Within a verbose oration across a dim  looking-glass,
I stand farther away, paint my famed mouth
And wave at a vacant arena,
Consumed by an explosion of stars pouring on my face.



10/10/2018
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Contest of Craig Cornish: I Stand Here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Congrats on your win, nette.
Lawless Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Alas, "all the world is but a stage" and most of us in no hurry to leave its center. Great write Nette
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:16 PM
This reminds me of Norma Desmond of Sunset Boulevard fame! Congratulations on your 4th plave win, Nette!
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Time has a way of humbling us all. Congrats on your win, Nette. John
Wolf Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Whoa! The ravishes of age so well described. A winner! ~ gw
Warrior Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Lovely write my friend...ready for a win,nette...love & light...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Dramatic write as expected, Nette:)
Anish Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 8:10 PM
Time wears us all down. Fame and love are elusive. Good write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Cunningham Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Great write Nette. Time marches on and we get older and sadly lose that sparkle. Tom. Good luck.
Papyrus Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:21 PM
"Blurring eye- mascara with heartbreaks concealed..." That alone will fly overt most heads...skilled poetics done with layering. This is that FIRE!!! They should've given you toys, because you're dangerously good with words painting emotion. Hugs with a smile...
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:04 PM
- A wonderful description, Nette - Best wishes for winning in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Reminds of Gloria Swanson as Norma Desmond coming down that staircase in Sunset Boulevard. This was fantastic Nette, such a picture you have created with this one. Once again I am amazed
Turner Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 1:33 PM
"vanity disguised as anguish" I think I've commented before, your poetry never ceases to amaze me, nette.
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Portrait becoming duller, glamour world lost in time's curtain call..a wave at a vacant arena..these line pretty much say it all..you've captured her persona well, nette. Best for a win.
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