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Standing in the Rain

pain is like a storm rivers of tears overflow with cold chill and flood sharp arrows from the dark clouds pierce into my hope for joy strong wind whips my heart hurting my spirit and soul but not my firm faith

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/31/2025 4:20:00 PM

after I had rotator cuff surgery, I was in so much physical pain...the kind you describe, the kind that can take away one's daily joy....faith and strength got me through...loved your words, Sara

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/31/2025 6:02:00 PM

No one can hide from the eye of life's storm. With faith, we can always stand our ground. Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. Love ~ BFA

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 9:22:00 PM

Standing is the key; we shouldn't bow down to the troubles and challenges we face. We must be firm in faith to please Him, Bernard. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 7/31/2025 6:00:00 PM

100% agree, sir Bill. Be safe ~ BFA