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Stanby - Haiku Sequence

drab lackluster mood brought on by somber winter ~ blue melancholy few treasured sunrays awaken dormant daydreams ~ hope lurks on standby AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on December 28, 2019 for contest KU DUET sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 1ST

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/9/2020 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line. A fabulous ku duet! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/10/2020 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Evelyn. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2020 12:54:00 PM

I like this Line. Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 3:30:00 PM

Thanks, Connie. Most appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2020 8:41:00 AM

Beautifully expressed, Line! Those few sun rays are a guarantee that spring will visit when the time is ripe:) Congratulation son your top placement! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2020 9:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Eve,. Most appreciated.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/4/2020 9:07:00 PM

This time of year can make some people feel without hope. Emotions well conveyed. Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Juliet, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2020 5:44:00 PM

very nicely done, and very nicely won!! Congrats, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2020 11:23:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 1/4/2020 3:41:00 PM

Wonderful Ku Duet Poem. I think you gave a Wonderful description of the somberness of winter. I love the wording and imagery. Congrats on a 1st place. JC