Stallions With Stingers

Terrified, the little girl cries
until her grandmother turns wise,
“All God’s creatures want to survive.
I know you love your small garden.
Now watch these workers work magic”

Those stallions with stingers, hover,
tantalizingly tease petals
of the roaring dandelions.
Those golden gals honey’d sunshine,
with fair upturned, xanthous faces.

Not to be outbuzzed, the blush rose,
her loving cup with upraised hands.
“Drink deeply, my love, my nectar
pleasing to my lord. Drink deeply.”
The succulent sensation sates.

“Well, child, a life without seeds won’t
succeed. Pollination is key.
Those bonnie buttercups happy
to see their buzzing friends come by.
Be patient, Daisy, he’s landing.”

9/11/2019
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SPONSORED BY CRAIG CORNISH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 7:25 AM
"Those bonnie buttercups happy to see their buzzing friends come by." Loved the alliteration; made this poem buzz, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thanks so much!
One Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 3:06 PM
This is really clever.. great advice in that last stanza
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Thank you so much, Silent!
Raven Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Hi Kim, love the content of this wonderful write. You followed the prompt in an excellent way. It reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:02 PM
- A wonderful story, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs!
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