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Stalker

You live your life unaware that you're mine and gaze through me like I do not exist you may ignore me now, with that I'm fine since I know all the signs that you have missed. The daily trips to see you at the store but buying nothing, see you then I leave you act like you have not seen me before a fact that I find so hard to believe. Maybe you're so wrapped up within yourself those flowing locks, blue eyes and perfect skin you know you'll never be left on the shelf for soon it will be time to take you in. Not long now, darling for that moment when Barbie, you join with me, your lover, Ken. For contest 'Stalker', sponsored by Silent One November 14th 2017

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Date: 6/3/2018 7:03:00 PM
Hello Viv … I always wonder where your poems are going as I read them. The stings are always great - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:19:00 AM
Nice twist, Viv!! Congrats on your win! Regards, John.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/27/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thanks, John, appreciate you dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/20/2017 9:37:00 AM
Congrats Viv to win top. Great poem to be appreciated.
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Date: 11/19/2017 6:58:00 AM
Congrats Viv on a well deserved first place--you are an awesome poet!
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:31:00 PM
A great poem, Viv. Congratulations on your 1st place podium win in the contest! Sandra
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/19/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra, this poem in no way reflects any creepy aspects of my personality :) . Viv x
Date: 11/18/2017 4:48:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Viv ... blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory, appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/18/2017 1:54:00 AM
OH OH OH OH! This did give me the creeps. Great write. I didn't expect the Barbie/Ken bit at all. Hugs
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:02:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen, fortunately I don't look quite that creepy when out shopping. Or do I? hmmmm...... Viv x
Date: 11/18/2017 12:23:00 AM
oh my gosh, I came back here to see that it was a doll. How did I not pick up on it with the heavy hint of Barbie and Ken at the ending? Good grief. And congrats for a very fine win!!
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Dolls can be creepy, too x
Date: 11/17/2017 9:19:00 PM
Didn't see that twist coming, lol. Congratulations on your win Viv...Maria
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Maria, very kind. Viv x
Date: 11/17/2017 1:50:00 PM
HaHa Viv!!! This made me laugh, well the ending did... Excellent imagination.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Silent One, quite a few never picked up on it. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/14/2017 10:52:00 PM
ahhh, someone else did stalker viewpoint! Love it, Viv!! And thanks for my win in your contest with my lovesick raccoon.
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Date: 11/15/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Thought I'd approach this one from the viewpoint of a doll, just to lighten it a little. Viv x
Date: 11/14/2017 5:56:00 PM
Great write, I liked the last line! Good luck in contest!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/14/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur, appreciate you popping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/14/2017 5:25:00 PM
Ohh Viv, the creepy stalker creep factor is an astronomical 10 for 10 in the psychological thriller... your last two lines gave my already chilled psyche goosebumps on my body to match! Your poem really elicited the response you wrote for - excellently expressed and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/14/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Susan, just a different take on the theme. Viv x

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