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Stalingrad

the soldier. the pretty city girl. in a room of rust and patterned blood cover ash all in the riven air ash of city, ash of sacrifice, ash of soul "I came here a soldier. You have made a monster of me." he told her, in a voice as cancerously black and lost as any stygian pit frightened and quiet she spread supine, naked, shaped, shaded like gold mortar shells screaming all around digging holes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/18/2021 6:36:00 PM
So telling...you have made a monster of me. The eternal dance of man and war. A unique and clever crafting indeed.
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Date: 6/4/2015 2:51:00 AM
"War is hell", as Sherman said. And you depict that hell and the monsters it makes of all on the front lines. Killing and pillaging as they might. Stark, effective imagery of men gone mad with war.
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Date: 5/26/2015 9:17:00 PM
This is heart-wrenching! The ugly repercussions of war...I haven't seen it from this perspective. We hear stories of war crimes and crimes committed against humanity and one is disgusted. Though not providing an excuse, your piece has somehow made it clear that one should not be so quick to judge. A 7 for this, Michael.
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