Stains of Imperfection: Flower and Man

This was not written for or entered in a contest, but I was inspired.
~~~ "We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun" 
                                                                      ~ Silent One ~~~


Enrobed and enveloped is the tender bud, slowly unfurling,
near bursting into beauteous bloom, petals unfolding, uncurling.
Each one a frail and fragile flower, swaying on delicate stems.
They stand vigilant in gardens or meadows as jewel toned gems.

Vulnerable to tenuous dangers of brisk and abusive weather,
as susceptible as humans to being tossed about as if a feather.
Rain can rip their velvet coating like teardrops falling on a cheek.
Both stains of imperfection though both are innocently meek.

We worship the sun for giving us warmth and a growing nature.
But we can be burned by its heat just like words in nomenclature.
Manhandled by Mariah, as her winds blow with turbulent power,
and humans are as assailable as the delicate stems of any flower.

We are both penetrable, skin and petals prone to bites and stings.
Flawlessness is unattainable, even if we were adorned with wings.
We should not seek perfection, for it was never meant to be for us.
We cut flowers, let them die, petals withering, 'fore turning to dust.

They are pressed between pages as memories to look back upon,
drying like our skin with age, scars deepening with each new dawn.
Let the sun shine spectacularly on flowers and humans it holds dear.
Imperfections of both are renderings, gently written by a sonneteer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 6/27/2024 8:49:00 AM
What a wonderful yet powerful write. Love your line, "We should not seek perfection, for it was never meant to be for us." So Very True. A great ending. In many ways we are like the flowers. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/28/2024 7:19:00 AM
Morning, Paula and thank you for the read and comments. We are similar in many fashions.
Date: 6/27/2024 6:09:00 AM
So much to enjoy and savor in this poem Lin, you have a remarkable talent for unfolding a line of thought into an artwork...the most precious gift a poet has is the imagination and you have trained yours well as evidenced by this effort.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/27/2024 6:52:00 AM
Paul, your thoughts on my poetry are always offered in great depth, but this time I felt goosebumps. I'm so very appreciative of your support and encouragement in my attempts to write. Considering it 'artwork' is the best compliment you could've given me. Merci, merci.
Date: 6/26/2024 3:29:00 PM
This is done to perfection. Yes we cut flowers and let them die, only to keep them close to our heart forever, creatures of love we can't let go. lol, I love it all, start to finish Lin, :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/27/2024 6:50:00 AM
Morning, Vie and thank you for such accolades on this one. I'd put off writing it although inspired by the contest theme. I don't enter them anymore, but my thoughts on this quote persisted until I put pen to paper...er... fingers to keyboard.
Date: 6/26/2024 11:44:00 AM
Inspirational and heartfelt penning!
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/26/2024 1:51:00 PM
Thank you for your descriptive thoughts, Craig. I appreciate your remarks.
Date: 6/26/2024 10:37:00 AM
Magnificent write. Wonderful imagery. It captures the essence. Enjoyed immensely.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/26/2024 1:50:00 PM
Hi, Frank and thanks for enjoying this one enough to leave a kind comment.
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