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sinful acts committing shallow desires feeding stupor bliss throb stifling seeds ego spawned spewing soiled thoughts heart contracting stance needing correcting soul requiring cleansing 21-April-2021 Pleiades S poetry contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman 7 lines @ 6 syllables each

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Date: 4/25/2021 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Unseeking Seeker! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/25/2021 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 4/23/2021 8:06:00 PM
I must say that you went all out with vivid imagery in this one. Splendid work and congratulations. Blessings and love, Janis
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Date: 4/23/2021 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Janis! I’ve yet to go through the other entries :)
Date: 4/21/2021 9:55:00 AM
Great Pleiades, US. Good luck in the contest. HugsEve
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Date: 4/21/2021 8:06:00 PM
thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 4/21/2021 9:04:00 AM
Splendid Pleiades. With alliteration too.
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Date: 4/21/2021 8:06:00 PM
thanks Victor!

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