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Stagnant Heart

My mind is telling my feet To take the first steps to change but with every step I take My heart lag behind refusing to move with silhouettes of you Replaying in my head my heart beats faster yet stagnant... Embracing everything that's you from your smell, to your touch your laughter and that silly grin… Every inch so unique yet familiar, my heart beats faster yet stagnant... Focused on you, refusing to move, refusing change…

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James Fraser

Date: 12/19/2010 4:03:00 AM

Words from a wanting heart that's ajar and desiring to be closed and loved >> James :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/18/2010 7:58:00 PM

Dear Wilma, I would Change all aspects of my Life; if I Thought I would heal YOUR Stagnant Heart YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/18/2010 8:24:00 AM

Dear Wilma, I'm sure we can all relate to this situation... not a comfortable one but you know the heart..that it can rule Romantics is true. I wish you well in every aspect of your life, my friend. As long as you're happy with yourself, don't change 'cause inside, you have to live with "you"! Beautiful piece of writing. Love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/17/2010 7:29:00 AM

so beautiful... stagnant is a good way to express these feelings.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/17/2010 1:16:00 AM

you sure brought forth some real emotions and situations here-- love sure can bring people to a standstill ei? very nicely written, Wilma! hugs to you-- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 4:46:00 PM

That's a hard place to be in, Wilma, and a good description of it in the title, STagnant Heart. Hope you are well today. It was my last day before the holiday vacation. thanks for your kind words on my job situation. I might be ok. Who knows. Time will tell. LUv ya, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/16/2010 2:05:00 PM

We are writing on the same pages lately... you deserve everything that is beautiful in life plus more.... enjoyed your work my dear love....luv to you from me always Michael

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 12/16/2010 1:30:00 PM

seems like,a tug of war of sorts,the soul yearns for more than what the heart can give or recieve...the allure of the world is a strong attraction to the heart,as peace of mind can be difficult to achieve....peace , jay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2010 12:15:00 PM

Don't know if this reflects personal experience, Wilma, but it seems that something is missing in this relationship. The physical attraction is surely there to quicken her heart, but she still feels like the relationship is stagnant - not going anywhere. Much to think about in this compelling poem! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/16/2010 10:59:00 AM

very powerful emotions in this one Wilma, much enjoyed, p.s. saw your photo on facebook ,you are adorable, was nice to put a face to the name

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 9:39:00 AM

I can feel the emotion in your work..Knowing that a relationship is not good but feeling some security in what one knows..I enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I hope that all is well..Your presence at my work lifed my spirit..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 12/16/2010 8:16:00 AM

I can feel the power in this write dear poet; moving and quite generous if ya ask me ! much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2010 5:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Wilma. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2010 4:52:00 AM

Sensitive and so emotional Wilma dear friend ..this came straight from your heart.. and inner feelings luv... written so well to convey the impressive message in an expressive poem..luv it ... enjoy your day and thankxxx for the heat.. today we have a heat wave ..it will be 30 ..yeah!!