Stage of Adulation

Around and around like a new red train
The little boy went repeating his name
David, David, David Saul, a new refrain
Sweet as a candle's honey, full of flame
And then as if a bird in sudden flight, he
Rushed to memory and sang aloud again
Boom, boom, boom; boom, boom, I see
Him his repertoire of words making rain.

Again: boom, boom, boom; boom, Johnny
Has a new drum, boom, boom, boom. He
Is happy in the web of speech, the tyranny
Of his tongue subdued to a matter of melody.
He is only two years old, and knows not yet
That drums are played before the cannon
Quakes, candles cuddle moths in flaming death 
Nor that his name carry a historic dimension.

All his joy is to sing his name, and race 
His heart beating boom, boom, boom, cross
The floor, while salt sweat rinse his face.
He had no gain in life and knew no loss
Mother was the only thing beside his song
That rattled his heart, father was a tree
And to him nothing could break the strong
He desire only mother raised from her knee:

Mother was always bent in prayer, or she
Too sang, longing for dove wings to fly
And he pictured the bird bright in beauty
Climbing a silver strand of light up the sky
But nothing made happy as his own song
David, David, David Saul, or boom, boom
Boom, Johnny has a new drum, a day long
Kite of joy frolicking around the little room.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryusaka Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Your imagery is remarkable. I love this: "sweet as a candle's honey". Amazing! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Guzzi Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 4:43 PM
You wrote yet another wonderful, mindfull verse congrads and as always thanks for the lovely entry! Light & Love
Strand Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 2:35 AM
Congrats on your succes in Debbie's contest L'nass.Rgds Brian
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 8:16 PM
A happy contented little two year old.is truly a beautiful sight and you described it perfectly. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 7:39 PM
Such a sweet winning poem! Congratulations on placing in the contest L'nass!!! Such a happy poem to read!! Love, Carrie
Peranteau Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 5:48 PM
L'nass,..I know I commented on this poetry before,..but I had to add,...you displayed such creative genius here,..and I don't mean,..wow, mister smarts here man,..I mean,..wow, Mr. wisdom here,..I can really feel Pop wiping "David Sauls" "Sweet salt" from his brow ! ty for your distinct nature, to pass it on to those of us who truly care ! *smiles* james
Chircop Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 2:51 PM
b e a u t i f u l---charma
Peranteau Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 11:40 AM
L'nass,..I see and feel the total beauty of this poem,..such creative imagery,..creating new ideas from previous experiences,.and ability to understand the imaginative creations of others,..said so with appreciation says I my friend,..ty for your genius !!! james
Adeite Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 7:45 AM
i love the flow of rhymes and the imageries, you are such a great poet.
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