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A little girl said to her mother one day
"Santa's not real, that's what my friends say"
Her tears welled up and she started to cry
And said" Is he real or is it a lie ?".

Her mom was shocked that she had been put to the test
And decided telling the truth would be for the best
She thought for a moment then said carefully
"Santa's spirit is real, as real as can be".

"He lived in Myra by the Aegean sea
It used to be Greece but now is Turkey
He left this life a long time ago
But not his spirit, that continues to grow".

"His name was Bishop Nicholas and wore robes of red
Was wealthy, helped the poor and made sure they were fed
He did things in secret whilst they slept in their bed
And soon people got to know about the bishop in red".

"Something else about him that people don't know
Was he came from a hot country  and it didn't snow
But the story grew bigger over the years
Snow, elves and sleigh added along with reindeers".

"All over the world little girls and boys
Wake up Christmas day to lots of new toys
And everyone says that Santa has been
Presents are left but he's never seen".

"Parents leave presents under the tree
But Santa guides them with his legacy
They do it for you out of kindness and love
Under the watchful eye of Santa above".

"Santa's spirit is alive, it's certainly not dead
The world's full of people like the bishop in red
Doing good for mankind, animals as well
When you next see your friends, this story do tell".

The little girl cheered up, kissed her mom and said
"I too want to be like the bishop in red"
"When I grow up, like Santa I'll be
Helping the poor and the needy".

Just like Nicholas who performed those good deeds
Helping the less fortunate, seeing to their needs
So when you venture out help someone if you can
Be it an animal a child, woman or man.

Merry Christmas.

Written 13th December 2017

Writing Challenge - December, 2019 - I want Christmas Poems - Poetry Contest.

Sponsored By Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/15/2022 5:06:00 AM
A lovely story! Thus the mother has cleared the doubts and ambiguities of her little daughter about Santa without telling a lie. Very convincing narration, dear Tom.
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Date: 9/15/2022 5:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I was lucky to visit the island where he was originally buried in Turkey. Tom
Date: 12/15/2019 8:10:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/15/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance, and also for hosting the contest. Tom
Date: 12/14/2019 1:17:00 AM
Hi Tom, This poem made me smile ear to ear. The legend of St. Nicholas so beautifully blended into our current belief in Santa Claus. Beautifully done! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2019 3:48:00 AM
Thanks very much Sam, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/23/2017 4:32:00 AM
what a wonderful story teller you are Tom i thoroughly enjoyed this captivating piece:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2017 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Jan ,I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hope you have a merry Christmas and best wishes for 2018. Regards Tom x
Date: 12/16/2017 1:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Tom.
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Date: 12/16/2017 2:11:00 PM
Ghita, Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 12/16/2017 8:46:00 AM
This is so endearing, Tom. Very nice rhymes and rhythm. When I first read your poetry, I had no idea you were new here on the Soup. Welcome! I am rather new myself. I've found it a place of encouragement and kindness.
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Date: 12/16/2017 10:56:00 AM
Rhoda, I'm glad you are enjoying my work. Yes, I've only just arrived and I find it a very educational site, so much talent and different styles. RE your request, Let me do more research and see what I can come up with. Regards Tom
Date: 12/15/2017 7:00:00 PM
Every parent of young children should print this out and keep it handy!
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Date: 12/15/2017 7:58:00 PM
There comes a time when all young children will ask the dreaded question, is he ,isn't he ?, Hopefully this will help. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/15/2017 12:32:00 AM
This is a tremendous piece. The first of your poems I have read and I am truly impressed.
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Date: 12/15/2017 2:37:00 AM
Richard, Thank you for your kind words.Im glad I found this site, there is so much talent on here and so many different styles that has been a real eye opener for me.Hopefully I'll get better and learn from the masters. Regards Tom

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