Spritze

Ben went to the pub for a shot
But when he got there he forgot
Until a nurse
Opened her purse
To show off the needle she brought
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Laurie Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:13 PM
Hello Rico ... luckily there are those who don't forget even if Ben was hoping - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Good one Rico....Blessing ~ Debra
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Oh my! lol He remembered quite quickly. :)
George Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 8:12 PM
ugh.... Lol
Leffanta Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 9:48 AM
"Spritze" is German for, "syringe" or "injection". Doesn't it sound like someone pushing down the plunger?
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:16 PM
yikes!
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:46 PM
lol
Bauer Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:15 PM
ha! nice one, rico!
Hankins Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Hmmm...I wonder if she delivered her shot on the spot? Seems like he might have gotten his messages twisted.
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Well at least he wasn't disappointed lol.
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