Springtime's Pace

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Springtime's Pace No winter’s trace a warm embrace is on your face as flowers grace and leaves reface on trees and space. While rabbits chase arms interlace. Slowdown the race to springtime’s pace in every place. 3/16/18

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2018 2:04:00 PM

A lovely fast flowing monorhyme, Sian. Slowing down the pace makes sense...pleasurable moments are ideally meant to last as long as possible. Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/19/2018 2:10:00 PM

...somehow I keep wanting to add a J to your name and shuffle the letters around:)

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2018 4:07:00 PM

Most pleasant, Sian.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/16/2018 3:50:00 PM

Very sweet, a truly adorable poem and I love the bunny pictures with it. Your poem has all the feel of pastel colors as Spring delivers. Poetry hugs ... CayCay