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Springtime's Pace

No winter’s trace
a warm embrace
is on your face
as flowers grace
and leaves reface
on trees and space.
While rabbits chase
arms interlace.
Slowdown the race
to springtime’s pace
in every place.

3/16/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/19/2018 2:04:00 PM
A lovely fast flowing monorhyme, Sian. Slowing down the pace makes sense...pleasurable moments are ideally meant to last as long as possible. Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/19/2018 2:10:00 PM
...somehow I keep wanting to add a J to your name and shuffle the letters around:)
Date: 3/16/2018 4:07:00 PM
Most pleasant, Sian.
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Date: 3/16/2018 3:50:00 PM
Very sweet, a truly adorable poem and I love the bunny pictures with it. Your poem has all the feel of pastel colors as Spring delivers. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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