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Springtime With Gramps

The death of winter carries varied sights. In April, when dandelions roar, “It’s Spring!” green yards transform by magic overnight. Gramps had sprayed his lawn, but in ours weeds bring an old game for kids as they dance and swing. Small windmills in disguise, children spread seeds giving Grandpa a cause for some dismay. He is no grouch, fence conversation leads to friendly talk of butterflies at play - riddles about what nature does in May. The kids amazed, watch squirrels building nests, questions evolve about the birds and bees. Gramps calls them varmints - Mother's Nature’s pests. “Ask your folks”, he replies with cough and wheeze. In naptime dreams, he aims a gun at trees. Gramps takes a walk, golf umbrella hovers for spring rains do not announce their coming. A neighbor lady hobbles to cover. Listen, his cane on her sidewalk - drumming, sweet songs of spring love, two voices humming. written May 7, 2014, edited on May 25, 2014

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Date: 6/8/2014 7:48:00 AM
Reason,, Congratulations, on the win, amazing Spring Imagery. <3 SKAT
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:01:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive winning work...It ended with such a nice love affair..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:20:00 PM
wow, this one is amazing. So many of the winning poems are strictly on nature, but you took your thoughts outside the box and made this about your grandpa. I loved this one. congrats.
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Date: 5/31/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, a bit of nature but focused on a person. Appreciate the comment.
Date: 5/31/2014 4:10:00 AM
Oh Reason this poem really captured my romantic heart. I loved it and it would have been at the top for me! Kudos on your win and I am fav'ing this one. #7 Aloha
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Date: 5/31/2014 9:44:00 PM
thank you, Connie...I welcome your comment and applause.
Date: 5/31/2014 2:06:00 AM
Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, Reason
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Date: 5/31/2014 9:46:00 PM
thanks, Dr. Ram - Hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it, thinking of Gramps, who is not my real Gramps but a real person in my life.
Date: 5/31/2014 12:04:00 AM
great job Reason, congrats on your win in my contest
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/31/2014 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, Francine, I welcome the honor.
Date: 5/30/2014 5:29:00 PM
Love this poem, Reason...it has great description and a side of humor. Congratulations.
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/31/2014 9:47:00 PM
thanks, Faye, glad to meet you. I appreciate your congrats and comment.
Date: 5/30/2014 4:30:00 PM
Gosh, this is so clever, Reason. The entire poem is beautifully penned and the second verse is absolutely awesome. This poem goes to my faves. Congratulations!
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/31/2014 9:42:00 PM
thanks, Carolyn, that is awesome of you to do...

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