Springtime With Gramps

The death of winter carries varied sights.
In April, when dandelions roar, “It’s Spring!”
green yards transform by magic overnight.
Gramps had sprayed his lawn, but in ours weeds bring
an old game for kids as they dance and swing.

Small windmills in disguise, children spread seeds
giving Grandpa a cause for some dismay.
He is no grouch,  fence conversation leads
to friendly talk of butterflies at play -
riddles about what nature does in May.

The kids amazed, watch squirrels building nests,
questions evolve about the birds and bees.
Gramps calls them varmints - Mother's Nature’s pests.
“Ask your folks”, he replies with cough and wheeze.
In naptime dreams, he aims a gun at trees.

Gramps takes a walk, golf umbrella hovers
for spring rains do not announce their coming.
A neighbor lady hobbles to cover.
Listen, his cane on her sidewalk - drumming,
sweet songs of spring love, two voices humming.


written May 7, 2014, edited on May 25, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 8, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Reason,, Congratulations, on the win, amazing Spring Imagery. <3 SKAT
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June 3, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive winning work...It ended with such a nice love affair..Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 1:20 PM
wow, this one is amazing. So many of the winning poems are strictly on nature, but you took your thoughts outside the box and made this about your grandpa. I loved this one. congrats.
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May 31, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Thank you, Andrea, a bit of nature but focused on a person. Appreciate the comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 4:10 AM
Oh Reason this poem really captured my romantic heart. I loved it and it would have been at the top for me! Kudos on your win and I am fav'ing this one. #7 Aloha
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May 31, 2014 at 9:44 PM
thank you, Connie...I welcome your comment and applause.
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, Reason
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May 31, 2014 at 9:46 PM
thanks, Dr. Ram - Hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it, thinking of Gramps, who is not my real Gramps but a real person in my life.
Roberts Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 12:04 AM
great job Reason, congrats on your win in my contest
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May 31, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Thanks, Francine, I welcome the honor.
Gibson Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Love this poem, Reason...it has great description and a side of humor. Congratulations.
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May 31, 2014 at 9:47 PM
thanks, Faye, glad to meet you. I appreciate your congrats and comment.
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May 30, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Gosh, this is so clever, Reason. The entire poem is beautifully penned and the second verse is absolutely awesome. This poem goes to my faves. Congratulations!
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May 31, 2014 at 9:42 PM
thanks, Carolyn, that is awesome of you to do...
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