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Springtime Villanelle

Rays of golden sun, at orange dawn, I enjoy...! I wake up, hearing chirps of birds at four O’ clock; At fifties! Yet, I feel, as though a little boy...! The earth and the heavens celebrate springtime-joy, Timely changes in weather never my glee block; Rays of golden sun, at orange dawn, I enjoy...! Newborn baby animals race around in cloy, In ponds around, bullfrogs in chorus gaily croak; At fifties! Yet, I feel, as though a little boy...! Breeze, as though touch me not, feels me and fades in coy, Within feelings, like salsa, to xylophones, rock; Rays of golden sun, at orange dawn, I enjoy...! Seed drowsing, spring up and shoot up fresh green savoy, Migratory birds to their homelands fly in flock; At fifties! Yet, I feel, as though, a little boy...! Sunshine! Shower! Wedding of foxes! Dogs convoy! Ducks and geese and swans and swamps display their catwalk; Rays of golden sun, at orange dawn, I enjoy...! At fifties! Yet, I feel, as though a little boy...! 15 April 2022 Springtime Villanelle Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/15/2022 8:25:00 PM
Wow! I almost missed this. I'm so glad I went back to check the winners list. Villanelle is quite a hard form for me but you did it gloriously with ease. What a spectacular springtime making us feel young again. Big CONGRATS on your win and this stellar villanelle my dear friend! Thanks for sharing! God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 5/9/2022 1:57:00 PM
Hi Christuraj, You composed such a lovely poem. You did the “ Springtime” season justice. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/9/2022 9:54:00 AM
Christuraj , congratulations on your win in Lassad's contest. Blessings
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Date: 5/7/2022 9:15:00 AM
Such a vividly descriptive, enjoyable poem, Christuraj! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/6/2022 12:09:00 PM
Alex, Congratulations on winning your placement in my contest. You've written a beautiful poem. Blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/6/2022 8:37:00 PM
Thank you very much giving me an opportunity.
Date: 4/17/2022 12:43:00 PM
This is a good one, Christuraj. I agree that villanelle is a difficult one. Happy Easter!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/6/2022 8:36:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/15/2022 4:04:00 PM
So much here to enjoy. The villanelle is a difficult one. Good one, Good Friday!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/15/2022 8:44:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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