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Auguste Toulmouche - Le Billet, 1883

Beside a gilded wall of white a dainty bench is resting; Victorian accents swirl about the ornate room, providing An elegance, a beauty in each line and curve, attesting To cultured tastes and upscale life, and hours spent deciding What shapes and colors best would suit the airy, springtime feeling: But looking closely, something there upon the bench reposes, A lady's fan and soft kid gloves, their jumbled state revealing What hasty movements cast them all aside when fragrant roses Arrived in state with baby's breath, and some white note, nigh hidden In bursting blooms of rainbow hue, by unknown hands delivered: And having noted thus, the eye could not but roam unbidden To she who holds the rose bouquet, to she who slightly shivered With thoughts that youths so oft imagine, thoughts that made her giddy And blushed her cheeks the color of the rosy dress cascading With lacy ruffles from her shoulders, looking just as pretty As her face, which looks for all the world like roses never fading; Two lips like shiny cherries, or the poppies that she tends to, Complexion like a creamy rose with hints of pink surrounding The fragile outer curling of its leaves; brown eyes that send you A warm, quick-spreading feeling, like the first hot sunrays bounding Thro' seas of blue to make the greengrass grow. Now look, she's taking The little note from out among the stems; perhaps with quiet And careful steps the message could be read; I have to try it. "My dearest Rose, I never could imagine so befitting A name for one who does resemble all that man finds charming In lovely blossoms: beauty surely, grace as they are flitting In breezes sweet of scent, and frailty, which I find disarming; So here's a gift no prettier and sweet than you. Sincerely, A man that loves you more than you could know. Quatrains of decapentasyllabic verse followed by a single line of iambic pentameter. Written by Isaiah Zerbst. Published for the first time January 26, 2015.

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Date: 2/27/2015 10:36:00 PM
wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:12:00 PM
Outstanding Isaiah! many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:45:00 AM
Lovely, descriptive, and complex. Well deserved as first place. Congrats, Isaiah.
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:21:00 AM
Masterful write Isaiah! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:09:00 PM
So beautifully written, Isaiah. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place win. Sandra
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Date: 1/31/2015 10:22:00 AM
my, this is such an extremely beautifully written piece of poetic literature that’s filled to the brim with vibrant imagery and smooth eloquence that speaks directly to me in a graceful ease, Isaiah... huggs
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Date: 1/27/2015 2:16:00 PM
what impeccable meter, my friend. WAs this written for a contest of Giorgio's or something? It sure would seem to fit the kind of requirements he asks of people. And it is a character study as well. You beautifully complemented the picture with your verse.
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:18:00 PM
An amazing poem, full of beautiful imagery and unfolding like a blossoming flower. Well done.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:41:00 PM
Your poem falls within the category of fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. The imagery is perfect. Nice flow of words and a interesting sounding poem with just the right flow to make the reader ponder the beauty of the words as they stroke the page. The sentiments are warm and inviting, each line compliments the line before and the effect is noticeable. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/26/2015 11:49:00 AM
Congrats. On your publishing.I am so so happy for you dear friend..And what a beauty this poem is.Extremely Romantic.Adding it to my favo(u)rites!Charma
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